TPO40
As stated in the reading passage, the author proposes several reasons why it is impossible to maintain a human presence on Venus, which are case serious doubt on by the listening passage which argues that space station above Venus's atmosphere can solve the problems which are pointed out by the author.
Firstly, as the author claims, the pressure on Venus is so high that neither spacecraft nor human can land on Venus. On the contrary, the listening passage believes that it is possible for human to live in the station above Venus's atmosphere. The higher the station locates, the less the pressure. The pressure of 50 kilometers' high is the same as on Earth, so spacecrafts and human will not be crushed. Accordingly, Building station above Venus make human be on Venus,which proves that the first reading point doesn't hold up.
Secondly, the author points out that there are no water reservoirs on Venus's and it is impractical to deliver water from Earth, but in the contrast, the speaker views that station can get water and oxygen from Venus. The atmosphere of Venus is made of all kinds of compounds including carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid which can be converted into water and oxygen. Thus there is no need to supply water from the Earth. Therefore, people in the station can get water and oxygen from Venus, which thus clashes with the writer's point of view.
Finally, the reading passage insists that there are little sunlight reaches Venus' s surface which means humans couldn't get electricity to power their machines or equipment, however, the speaker contends with the writer's statement by arguing that space station can get enough sunlight for powering their machines. There are clouds at the 50 kilometer's high atmosphere but they are not thick,which allows sunlight to pass through. Besides, erecting station above helps people use solar power cells getting sunlight both directly reaches station and from reflecting. Thus, it is possible to get sunlight on Venus and, which challenges the last viewpoint of the writer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ation above Venus make human be on Venus,which proves that the first reading point doe...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ich proves that the first reading point doesnt hold up. Secondly, the author points...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...can be converted into water and oxygen. Thus there is no need to supply water from t...
^^^^
Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ches Venus s surface which means humans couldnt get electricity to power their machines...
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Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
... however, the speaker contends with the writers statement by arguing that space station...
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Line 7, column 390, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...s high atmosphere but they are not thick,which allows sunlight to pass through. Beside...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 496, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...above helps people use solar power cells getting sunlight both directly reaches s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 339.0 270.72406181 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0383480826 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45490121409 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492625368732 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 419.366225166 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1818447492 49.2860985944 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 21.698381199 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389424869679 0.272083759551 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148572369764 0.0996497079465 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625632789366 0.0662205650399 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232645738378 0.162205337803 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688894814836 0.0443174109184 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.3589403974 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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