TPO42
In the reading passage, the author claims that there are three viable solutions in order hinder the birds to hurt due to the glasses, which are unspecified for the bird as a barrier. However, finding all the ideas implausible and questionable, the professor casts doubt on what is presented in the text and states some evidence to the contrary.
At first, the author argues that substituting the regular glasses with the transparent ones will sole the problem. Conversely, the lecturer contend this idea the surface of one-way glasses acts as a mirror; hence, it reflects the image of tree or sky. In fact, the birds are not capable to percieve the mirror, having seen it as a tree or sky, the bird directly fly into the glass. So, applying the transparent windows will be as bas as the regular ones.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that painting the regular windows would be a doable option to elliminate this problem. On the other hand, the professor dismisses this idea by clarifying the fact that as it was mentioned in the text, there are some open spaces in the painted glasses. Indeed, birds percieve them as a open hole which they can fly through them. Moreover, if we fill all the spaces in a way that no unpainted area remains, so dark become the interrior of the room that people inside it cannot see anything. Subsequently, this solution will not make any difference in a situation.
Finally, the author asserts that creating the artificial magnetic will deviate the path of the birds and impede carshing the windows. The lecturer, though, disputes this point by subscribing the fact that it is true that birds are equiped with such navigation ability, but they do not utilize it all the time nonetheless. Indeed, having used them in long distances, for instance imigrating to the warm region from the cold locations, birds do not have it in short trips. Consequntly, they use their eyes and bright to determine their ways in these short distances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...glasses. Indeed, birds percieve them as a open hole which they can fly through th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, for instance, in addition, in fact, in short, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 341.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81524926686 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57452954379 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 145.348785872 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565982404692 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1728694376 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.466666667 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06452816374 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361304826196 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10321852049 0.0996497079465 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577873757365 0.0662205650399 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188292968003 0.162205337803 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594755698183 0.0443174109184 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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