tpo44
The lecture and the article are both about silver coins Which discovered in the united states. The teacher says that these coins have genuine historical evidence. However, the reading opposes this concept for the following reasons.
First of all, the trouble with the distance between America and Europe. The lecturer mentions that it is really the distance between America and Europe so great but that is not mean the Norse could not bring the subject with them.e The reading asserts that the Norse did not bring these coins because the Europa is too far.
Secondly, the issue of no other coins found. The professor says that if the coins limit, that not mean the Norse did not use it. Also, he mentions that the Norse always were traveling to Europe and America. They brought many subjects with them besides the coins when the back to America. Although, The reading disagrees with this concept.
Finally, the problem of using coins. the professor says that these coins were very valuable for the Norse. they brought them and used them when they return to Europa. Moreover, he says that they might use the coins in making necklaces because of the
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...that not mean the Norse did not use it. Also, he mentions that the Norse always ...
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... them besides the coins when the back to America. Although, The reading disagrees...
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...es the coins when the back to America. Although, The reading disagrees with this concep...
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... Finally, the problem of using coins. the professor says that these coins were ve...
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...coins were very valuable for the Norse. they brought them and used them when they re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 197.0 270.72406181 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94923857868 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05019593148 2.5805825403 79% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 145.348785872 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522842639594 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 419.366225166 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6686983103 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6428571429 110.228320801 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 21.698381199 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360234069545 0.272083759551 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126335187986 0.0996497079465 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723376412912 0.0662205650399 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227341842138 0.162205337803 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551894732242 0.0443174109184 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 63.6247240618 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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