TPO49 Integrated Writing
Both reading passage and the lecture arguess the pssibility of using navigating by the skys by humpback whales. With this in mind, the reading states that there are some reasons to confirm that humpback whales use skys and stars to navigate. The author, on the other hand, refutes all three episodes of arguments mentioned in the passage, believing tha none of those evidences are convincing.
First, ther wither points out that humpback whales are so intelligent and have compelex brain structure so, they well-developed cognitive ability could help them to find their destination by night sky observation. Conversely, the professor makes it clear that there is not any direct conection between intelligence and using sky navigation. Put it in other words, he says that there are some other clever animals which don't use stars for orientation moreover, there is some animals using stars for navigation but they are not intelligent enough. Thus, navigating by stars in not the sign of intelligence.
Second, the author holds the view that humpback whales move in a straight directions for long distances and it is possible if they orient themselves by some external assistances, like some birds. there for the stars at night can provide them a sign for find their way. However, the lecture contradicts this idea and mentions that it is possible to use magnetic field for migration in straght lines as some other animals.
Finally, the reading selection illustrates that humpback whales, sometines, floating straight up fo some minutes while kepe their heads above. Therefore, it is plausible that these animals have this rare behavior in order to observe sky and stars to find their ways. On the other hand, the speaker explains that sharks do this too but i is obvious that they act this for looking animals that they want to hunt. Besides, humpback whales have this behavior alos when there is no stars in the sky, hence i
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Both reading passage and the lecture arg...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of those evidences are convincing. First, ther wither points out that humpb...
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Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
... well-developed cognitive ability could help them to find their destination by night sky observat...
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Line 7, column 420, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ere are some other clever animals which dont use stars for orientation moreover, the...
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Line 7, column 461, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some animals'?
Suggestion: there are some animals
...ont use stars for orientation moreover, there is some animals using stars for navigation but they are...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ars in not the sign of intelligence. Second, the author holds the view that h...
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Line 11, column 75, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'direction'?
Suggestion: direction
...that humpback whales move in a straight directions for long distances and it is possible i...
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Line 11, column 197, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... external assistances, like some birds. there for the stars at night can provide them...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...straght lines as some other animals. Finally, the reading selection illustrat...
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Line 15, column 466, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no stars'?
Suggestion: there are no stars
...ack whales have this behavior alos when there is no stars in the sky, hence i
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, conversely, finally, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 320.0 270.72406181 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09375 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59566194592 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54375 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4705818835 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06452816374 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489517642344 0.272083759551 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156382216541 0.0996497079465 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808492897985 0.0662205650399 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291626492753 0.162205337803 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887013301192 0.0443174109184 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.