TPO5 Q1
In this sets of material, the article states that the settlements of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico were notable for their "great houses," massive stone building that contain hundreds of rooms. How archaeologists have been trying to determine how the buildings were used and provides three reasons of supports. However, the professor explains that he did not agree with theories and refutes each of author's reasons.
First, the reading states that Chaco structures were purely residential, with each housing hundreds of people. The professor refutes this point by stating that there are a few fire places in houses. The fire places should use for cooking and heating, but these houses had ten fire places, it is not enough for hundreds people.
Second, the article states that Chaco structures were used to store food supplies. However, the professor contends that these houses did not use for storage because it had grain maize, and this type was using in houses.
Third, the reading avers that houses were used as ceremonial centers because they founded parts for pots. The lectures opposes this point by saying that parts of pots and sand are trash, maybe it is regular trash. All trash in locations are material for construction workers.
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The fire places should use for cooking
The fire places should be used for cooking
Sentence: The fire places should use for cooking and heating, but these houses had ten fire places, it is not enough for hundreds people.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to hundreds and people
flaws:
No. of Words: 204 250
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 21 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 204 250
No. of Characters: 1007 1200
No. of Different Words: 114 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.779 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.936 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.267 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 52 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.545 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.614 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.375 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.619 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.082 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4