TPO8
In this set of material, the article and the lecture disagree about whether Chevalier de singlet's excellent memoir was recording truth adventures written the story of his life. The writer doubts the truth and provides three reasons to support. However, the professor refutes each reason as the following.
First, the reading claims that if Chevalier was the rich man at that time why he would borrow money for his parties in Switzerland '( the wealthy living city). However, the professor rebuffs this point and explains his idea as that borrowing money does not mean he was poor. The professor explains that people at that time had to sell some of their properties to have cash for their wealthy parties and that cash takes few days to be obtained; therefore, he borrowed that money.
The second example, the passage thinks that it would be impossible to write every specific detail of conversations after a long time and even though the conversation between Chevalier and Voltaire happened, it would be impossible to write every single word between them. However, the listening suggests that it was true that Chevalier wrote those conversations, and there were witnesses at their time confirmed those talks.
Third, the author claims that it would be impossible to Chevalier to escape from the prison and this story was one of his adventurer imagination. He supports that who could this guy being capable of escaping from that prison and many other prisoners who were stronger than him were incapable. The professor casts doubts the writer and thinks this story was true also, because in other historical resources at the same time of his escaping, they admitted that there was great repair to the prison's wall and ceilings. Which confirm his story to be true also.
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was recording truth adventures written the story of his life.
was recording the true adventures writing the story of his life.
was recording the true adventures which write the story of his life.
The second example, the passage thinks that
In the second example, the passage thinks that
Second, the passage thinks that
The professor casts doubts the writer
The professor casts doubts on the writer
flaws:
Double check the second arguments:
However, the listening suggests that it was true that Chevalier wrote those conversations, and there were witnesses at their time confirmed those talks.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 294 250
No. of Characters: 1444 1200
No. of Different Words: 156 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.141 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.912 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.413 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.797 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.359 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.609 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.164 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4