Travelling to other countries is a way for people to take time away from their daily worries. While visiting a foreign country, some people like to go to the tourist attractions while others prefer going to quiet places where they can truly enjoy the country’s culture.
Many people consider travelling as a way to take a break from everyday burdens. For some, the goal of traveling is to look at famous monuments and mark them off their bucket lists. For others, traveling is much more intimate, as it is a way for them to heal and experience the real culture of a particular place. I consider travelling as a perfect way for relaxation and I prefer to visit quiet places rather than those which are popular among tourists. I feel this way for two reasons.
Firstly, quiet places allow freely exploring the foreign culture. In such a calm manner I can experience country culture at my own pace. I mostly go abroad with my family to take a rest from the daily routine and replenish my mind and body during the trip. However, visiting tourist attractions always puts me under the stress of trying to experience as much as possible. This way it becomes a race for experience and under such conditions, the travel feels no other way than exhausting. For example, when I was in Spain, I and my family scheduled some tours across the country. But when we actually were on the tours we had to constantly think about the time we have left before we ride away. But when we visited Turkey, there was no such haste and every one of us enjoyed the visit because they could do everything they could. By travelling we do not intend to visit particular places, so every time we consider a new trip, we value freedom and quality over experience.
Secondly, travelling to such quiet places has healing properties. Such ambience soothes the body and soul and all the worries are replaced by inner peace. and when we return to our daily routine we fell refreshed. That contrast between a rush of everyday life and peaceful atmosphere brings long-awaited relief. For example, when we visited Karlovy-Vary in the Czech Republic, there were no attractions but mineral water sources placed throughout the city. Every day we happened to go across the city, sipping mineral water from special cups and filling them over and over. This was truly enjoying, despite there was no particular destination or any outstanding attractions. A contrast between a rush of everyday life and peaceful atmosphere brings long-awaited relief.
All in all, I think travelling is intended to release all the stress bottled up due to daily concerns. The best way to do so is to visit quiet places where you can truly enjoy the change in the ambience at your own pace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...he worries are replaced by inner peace. and when we return to our daily routine we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 7.30242825607 274% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 22.412803532 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 30.3222958057 175% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1373.03311258 148% => OK
No of words: 429.0 270.72406181 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74358974359 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60274129655 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 145.348785872 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517482517483 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 419.366225166 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 13.0662251656 184% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4193547116 49.2860985944 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7916666667 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 21.698381199 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06452816374 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282569599724 0.272083759551 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725527155425 0.0996497079465 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472831777707 0.0662205650399 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161955675364 0.162205337803 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509980690489 0.0443174109184 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 63.6247240618 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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