UBecause of climate change, more and more land that was once used to grow crops or provide food for animals is turning to dry, unusable desert land. There are many proposals about how to stop this process, known as desertification. A number of proposals involve growing trees, because trees can help protect soil and provide many other benefits to fight against desertification. Some scientists have proposed that the best way to grow trees in dry areas in danger of desertification is by using a box-shaped device surrounding the young tree.The device collects water that condenses from vapor in the atmosphere and helps the tree to grow. However, other scientists believe that this device will not be successful in fighting against desertification for the following reasons.First, at a cost of 25 U.S. dollars each, the device would make growing trees a prohibitively expensive process. Meaningful efforts to fight desertification involve growiing millions of trees. Some countries most affected by desertification cannot afford to buy devices for millions of trees Second, plans for fighting desertification involve asking local people to install and maintain the devices. People living in some of the areas most affected by desertification work long days in harsh conditions: sometimes barely managing to provide food for their families. It would be difficult to motivate these people to look after trees that cannot serve as a source of food for them. Third, the device's ability to collect and conserve water is limited. Each one provides only enough water to keep a small tree alive. Trees that have outgrown the device have to deal with unforgiving environmental conditions on their own. In some places where the devices are being tried, six months can pass without a drop of rain. Once the trees become too big for the device, they may not be able to survive in such a harsh environment.
The reading text and lecture are both about the new technology that can be use to grow plant to mitigate the problem of desertification. While the author feel that, new box technology is not an worthwhile, in contrast to that lecturer present the three different view to prove that this new box technology is very useful.
First of all, according to reading text, grow box will cost about the 25 U.S. dollars, that is very costly. Article also mentions that, we have to plants million of tree to control a desertification. However, lecturer posits that, this grow box is reusable. In addition to that, he states that, this box can be used for 20 times in its life time. Then, if divide that cost of box by the number of tree then it will be too cheaper than the other sources.
Secondly, author suggests that, this boxes will require a frequent maintenance and he also notes down that, it will too much hard to convince the local to people to do that. On the other hand, professor point out that, if you talking about the rewards then it will be easy to motivate them. On top of that, he enlists various benefits like, people can use this water to irrigate their own plant and use old branches as a firewood.
In last, writer believe that, this device has a very limited capacity to stored a water. this box is only suitable for young tree. large tree can not grow in this boxes. To oppose this claim. Tutor said that, the large trees does not require this boxes. once the the root of the young tree can reach up to the moist soil, then it can thrive on their own. Additionally, he provided one instance that, 90 percent of the tree planted in the Sahara desert is still survive without this grow box.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...th about the new technology that can be use to grow plant to mitigate the problem o...
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Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...th about the new technology that can be use to grow plant to mitigate the problem o...
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Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...or feel that, new box technology is not an worthwhile, in contrast to that lecture...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'plant'.
Suggestion: plant
... Article also mentions that, we have to plants million of tree to control a desertific...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...e also mentions that, we have to plants million of tree to control a desertification. H...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e. In addition to that, he states that, this box can be used for 20 times in its lif...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...his box can be used for 20 times in its life time. Then, if divide that cost of box by th...
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'water'.
Suggestion: water
...e has a very limited capacity to stored a water. this box is only suitable for young tr...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ery limited capacity to stored a water. this box is only suitable for young tree. la...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ery limited capacity to stored a water. this box is only suitable for young tree. la...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Large
...is box is only suitable for young tree. large tree can not grow in this boxes. To opp...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... young tree. large tree can not grow in this boxes. To oppose this claim. Tutor said...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Once
...arge trees does not require this boxes. once the the root of the young tree can reac...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...trees does not require this boxes. once the the root of the young tree can reach up to ...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...trees does not require this boxes. once the the root of the young tree can reach up to ...
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Line 7, column 462, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'survived'.
Suggestion: survived
...e planted in the Sahara desert is still survive without this grow box.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, in addition, in contrast, talking about, first of all, in contrast to, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 22.412803532 192% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48397435897 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31291920521 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 145.348785872 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535256410256 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8034538955 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2941176471 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1176470588 7.06452816374 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 4.19205298013 382% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0947394750005 0.272083759551 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422488723429 0.0996497079465 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024506429474 0.0662205650399 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638260908279 0.162205337803 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201407176683 0.0443174109184 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.3589403974 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.2367328918 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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