What should teenagers do to help the community. Write about 250 words, use specific reasons.

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What should teenagers do to help the community. Write about 250 words, use specific reasons.

Our world is modernizing and industrializing. Consequently, problems are considerably increasing. This required enormous help from everyone. Thus, teenagers should give an effective role in reducing communal issues. In this essay, I'm going to suggest some recommendations which should be accomplished by teenagers.

To begin with, it'd be better for students to be hard-working at studying. Profound knowledge may be a great help in campaigning against many intricate problems.

Secondly, why don't teenagers start participating in voluntary activities such as planting trees and helping elderly and old people? By devoting your best to share your love and share with everybody, you'll able to develop your social skills and become more independent. Whitmore, not only do these skills help them oppose violence and other massive maladies but also help them to have a more comfortable and easier life.

In conclusion, teenagers play an important role in helping this community.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 12.0772626932 8% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 22.412803532 45% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 1373.03311258 61% => OK
No of words: 148.0 270.72406181 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7027027027 5.08290768461 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 4.04702891845 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16489688861 2.5805825403 123% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.743243243243 0.540411800872 138% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 419.366225166 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7340960405 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7272727273 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4545454545 21.698381199 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154713776458 0.272083759551 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052759011694 0.0996497079465 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504020875827 0.0662205650399 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946940144244 0.162205337803 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482888455391 0.0443174109184 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.2367328918 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.42419426049 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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