What would you change about your hometown

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...ps.Yes,im talking about Mumbai in india.It consists of plethora of diversity in cu...
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...t like looking at the boisterous streets ,the traffic jams , inundated public tran...
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... hometown pertaining to NOISE POLLUTION.It is an issue which needs to be addressed...
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...sue which needs to be addressed luicdly.The constant honking of private cars and pu...
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...sport like the bus,the clamorous streets ,the high volumes of woofer in the privat...
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...ate events having high levels of decibel ,the teeming population and constant chat...
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...uld be hear birds chirping in my veranda .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 7.30242825607 315% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 1373.03311258 159% => OK
No of words: 396.0 270.72406181 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51515151515 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21387330045 2.5805825403 125% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 145.348785872 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 419.366225166 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 21.2450331126 372% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.349134691 49.2860985944 378% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 436.8 110.228320801 396% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.2 21.698381199 365% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06452816374 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 58.0 4.19205298013 1384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960990148843 0.272083759551 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659158705777 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684649225123 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659158705777 0.162205337803 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684649225123 0.0443174109184 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.2 13.3589403974 331% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.17 53.8541721854 -32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 5.55761589404 308% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.3 11.0289183223 320% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.92 12.2367328918 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.86 8.42419426049 153% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 63.6247240618 209% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 10.7273730684 289% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 10.498013245 320% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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