What would you change about your hometown?
Hometowns play pivotal role in establishing foundation in ones life..Whether being a developed one or developing one,it always holds a special spot in ones heart.Just like mine,I come from a hometown which is called the city which never sleeps.Yes,im talking about Mumbai in india.It consists of plethora of diversity in culture ,ethnicity ,religion and among the people.It is incessantly swarming with life omnipresently.Just like looking at the boisterous streets ,the traffic jams , inundated public transports and long queues for receiving services from the banks,supermarkets and so on.
There are always some changes which are desired with the period of time.I personally would adore a change in my hometown pertaining to NOISE POLLUTION.It is an issue which needs to be addressed luicdly.The constant honking of private cars and public transport like the bus,the clamorous streets ,the high volumes of woofer in the private cars,the public events and private events having high levels of decibel ,the teeming population and constant chatter ,the unchecked violation of the standard decibel rates around old age homes,schools and hospitals ,which is pretty cantankerous to the residence and pedestrians.
This is an issue which has risen exponentially over a period of time.I believe there should be strict rules and regulations implemented to get it under control .The detrimental effect is highly devastating,though unseen ,it has caused a lot of damage.For instances,there is a study by WHO which showed more and more people are having hearing problems,chronic stress and disturbed sleeping patterns.The ganesh festivals in india annually,accounts as one of the noisiest celebration in mumbai.Other political ,religious and private events like weddings too contribute to it.Its not only the humans but the animals get totally cantakerous in these high volumes,some tend to hide and howl and go through psychological dilemmas.
There should be draconian rules set to follow the decibel set by the noise control authority ,in public areas like schools and hospitals should be totally be avoided and implementing fees and severe jurisdiction rules should be exercised.The geriatric patients and well fare centres should be given uttermost care in these situations too.A prior notice and a timed zone patterns should be establish to decrease the decibel surrounding a particular area.
Therefore ,these changes when excercised and such a grieving problem would be solved in my hometown and there would be a time again where I would be hear birds chirping in my veranda .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 7.30242825607 315% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 1373.03311258 159% => OK
No of words: 396.0 270.72406181 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51515151515 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21387330045 2.5805825403 125% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 145.348785872 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 419.366225166 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 21.2450331126 372% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.349134691 49.2860985944 378% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 436.8 110.228320801 396% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.2 21.698381199 365% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06452816374 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 58.0 4.19205298013 1384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960990148843 0.272083759551 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659158705777 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684649225123 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659158705777 0.162205337803 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684649225123 0.0443174109184 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.2 13.3589403974 331% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.17 53.8541721854 -32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 5.55761589404 308% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.3 11.0289183223 320% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.92 12.2367328918 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.86 8.42419426049 153% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 63.6247240618 209% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 10.7273730684 289% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 10.498013245 320% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
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Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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