Wild tuna, a species of large ocean fish, have decreased in number because of overfishing Recently, attempts have been made to farm tuna by feeding the fish in ocean cages until they become large enough for sale. However, tuna farming has faced several problems and criticisms.
In the reading talks about the growh and nurture young wild tuna in the captivity in order to get adult to sell. Also, there claimed some disadvantege of captivity of tuna for this method that needs to pay attention.
I the beginning, the author stated that the female tune do not lay on the eggs because of the captivity and the farmer had to capture a lot of young tuna to stock their field. This process will be caused the population of tuna decreased for long time. On the other hands, The speaker elaborate that the female can lay on their eggs if the farmer have injected special hormoen in captivity environment.
Moreover, the reading proposed that the tuna needs a plenty voulme of small fish in order to growth and reproduction because one of the tune should reach to nearly 700 kg then consequently fed a lotof food. providing the higih voulme of food is very costly and expensive for farmer. Conversly, the professor assereted that some of plant can replced for tuna food. this plant can give proper nutrient to feed the tuna.
Finally, the author stated that some of inherent disease such as blood floading caused lot of tuna weaked and died. This infection steamed from an paradsite that widespread in bloods cycle of tuna. The speaker saied that there are some way to control of this deseae by special treatemnt. He said that In a farm in Australia some of farmer can treat tun if they swin in deeper water in gowing pools. or their career and personal living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Providing
... kg then consequently fed a lotof food. providing the higih voulme of food is very costly...
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Suggestion: This
...me of plant can replced for tuna food. this plant can give proper nutrient to feed ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt disease such as blood floading caused lot of tuna weaked and died. This infect...
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Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...d and died. This infection steamed from an paradsite that widespread in bloods cyc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
... swin in deeper water in gowing pools. or their career and personal living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, if, moreover, so, then, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62357414449 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34405635217 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555133079848 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6820970403 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8571428571 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195342199994 0.272083759551 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661685590595 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374152742504 0.0662205650399 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115794448755 0.162205337803 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200859295565 0.0443174109184 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.2367328918 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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