People in today's world have become too dependent on automobiles. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer."
In the modern decade and widespread technology in the world, one of the controversial and considerable issue is using device such as automobiles for movement and transport of goods and individuals. Humankind tend to facilitate of their works and task with easy ways. Admittedly, one of the appreciable human’s inventions is automobile that it is an essential thing in every family. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, one of considering issue is time-consuming for everyone in the hectic life style. Automobile enable to easily and fast move goods and individual as soon as possible. In the past, transport is very harshness and long for passenger and good that consequently it is not possible for everyone. in my person life I believe that the automobile can very useful to overcome my different task. if don’t use automobile instead of take walk, I definitely satisfy my task.
Secondly, cost of transportation is very critical for trade, passenger. Automobile enable to decrease of fees of transport with a high-speed. For example, decreasing of costs for business can strengthen power of competition in the market. In recent decades, goods can transport from the rest of the world such winks of eyes.
Last but not least, humankind tend to sophisticate in different aspect of technology. Demanding advancement is an inherent need for everyone that it enable meet the needs.
In conclude, automobile is essential in the modern hectic lifestyle and nobody can deny the role of it in interior life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i feel, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 257.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13618677043 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07015480146 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552529182879 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9836146213 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0386936711655 0.236089414692 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0131610995047 0.076458572812 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020271268978 0.0737576698707 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0192909189601 0.150856017488 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195058868443 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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