Zoos
The article states that, the zoos are essential for a modern life and provides three reasons of support.
However, the professor states that there are conflicts about this issue and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that the most animal lovers are used in zoos as animal keepers. The professor refutes this point by
that he states the animal keepers are not quite animal passionate and there are a several observations of lack of attention to poor animals which cause severe problems for them such as finding two red pandas dead as a result of inappropriate keeping.
Second, the article posits that zoos act as a mean of education however, the professor says that they mostly act as an entertainment spaces. According to professor, they intend to attract the visitors for their own purposes. Note that they always show a misleading exhibition.
Third, the reading says that the zoos try to help and protect the endangered species while the professor opposes this point
by explaining that their poor facilities and circumstances cannot lead to a good preservation. In addition, he states that the zoos and other related issues.
Normally keep a few number of animals which are faced extinction and he mentions that, they cannot bread successfully according to the Birth problems.
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- sports or libraries? 76
- Directions: You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response.Your response will be judged onn the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage. Typic 3
- Should children grow up in the countryside or city? 90
- TPO 46 73
- do you enjoy eating out on in home? 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'observation'?
Suggestion: observation
...imal passionate and there are a several observations of lack of attention to poor animals wh...
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Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
... other related issues. Normally keep a few number of animals which are faced extinction a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, third, while, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 216.0 270.72406181 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66025705386 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560185185185 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.874244182 49.2860985944 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.7 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.09492273731 195% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21466206957 0.272083759551 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101848430115 0.0996497079465 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106528854213 0.0662205650399 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109396449874 0.162205337803 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889038746721 0.0443174109184 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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