Happiness
In this paper, I will present my opinion about why happiness is difficult to define and what factors are significant in achieving happiness.
Happiness is an emotion which shows when somebody senses enjoyment or pleasure. For instance, when my daughter kisses me and hugs me, I intuit the feeling which renders me happy, comfortable, and delightful. As an abstract thing, happiness is difficult to define. We cannot define an abstract thing because we cannot touch or see it. Just like the wind, happiness can only be sensed but cannot be touched and be seen.
I believe there are numbers of essential factors in achieving happiness. The main factor is gratitude. It is a feeling that emerges when we pleased with somebody for doing something. National motivator said “gratefulness will create happiness in your heart”. Second factor is not to worry about your problems because every problem can be solved. If you can think clearly, you can find the solution for the problem. For instance, when I have to finish my duty at Test English School I usually take a shower to help me think plainly. So, I can finish my work on time. Lastly, try to be a good listener. When my friend shares his problem to me, I just listen to him. Even though, I cannot solve his problem, I render him to think clearly to solve his problem. And when I help him, I feel happiness.
In conclusion, let me reiterate that happiness will create your life amazing. So, be a gratitude person!
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