Some people believe that visithe host country should wel differences? What is r view?

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Some people believe that visithe host country should wel differences? What is r view?

There has been a dramatic increase in tourism to foreign countries annually in recent years due to the fact that traveling abroad has become far easier calthat visitors to other nations should obey local customs and behaviors for the sake of preserving their own cultures. Overall, it is my personal view that the host country should welcome cultural differences for the following reasons.

First of all, some people argue that the arrival of foreign cultures may lead to the loss of local customs, but they fail to see the benefits of cultural diversity. The mixture of many customs will make lif...

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though welcoming other cultures help to reduce culture shock
though welcoming other cultures helps to reduce culture shock

Sentence: It shows respect to other cultures .Visitors will also feel friendliness and hospitability of local people.
Error: hospitability Suggestion: No alternate word

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