The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
This report will describe about a figure which is demonstrate the amount of leisure time enjoyed by male and female in variation employment status over 2 years, during 2010 till 2012.
This chart, clarify man spent more leisure time than woman. Employed full time man, spent fifty hours a week, whereas, woman in the same condition spent less than forty hours a week of spare time. Man who unemployed or who retired, spent over eighty hours a week in their leisure time, while woman in that situation, spent less than eighty hours a week. According to the bar chart, housewives, spent around fifty hours a week, which longer than employed part time females who have free time only forty hours a week.
The data also gives information that among 2010-2012, man or woman, in every employment status, didn’t enjoy their leisure time more than ninety hours each week. It is the end of my report.
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Sentence: This report will describe about a figure which is demonstrate the amount of leisure time enjoyed by male and female in variation employment status over 2 years, during 2010 till 2012.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and demonstrate
Sentence: Man who unemployed or who retired, spent over eighty hours a week in their leisure time, while woman in that situation, spent less than eighty hours a week.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to who and unemployed
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 9
No. of Words: 156 200
No. of Characters: 713 900
No. of Different Words: 87 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.534 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.571 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.106 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 36 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 23 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 14 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.908 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.553 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.766 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.298 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4