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Do you agree or disagree with the view that minimum driving age should be raised? Give your reasons.
Currently, in many countries like Australia, if you are 17, you have the right to get a driving licence. I, personally, think that the minimum age for drivers has to go up to the age of 20.
Every year, 2000 people become victims of road accidents with death outcome. Moreover, a great number of them get injures and become disabled. Of course, not all guilty drivers are 17, but the majority of them are. Young adults can drive the car technically and learn the rules. But they are not as mature as older drivers, because they are inexperienced. It is not their fault, but it often creates dan...
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Avg. Sentence Length: 16.588 21.0
More compound or complex sentences wanted.
A lot of 'but' in the essay. The sentences are not going to be addressed smoothly because of 'but'.
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 282 350
No. of Characters: 1360 1500
No. of Different Words: 167 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.098 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.823 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.717 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.588 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.996 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.28 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.463 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.067 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5