Most writers of fiction do not earn enough money to live from their writing.
Do you think the government should give them financial assistance to help encourage good literature?
İf you do not have any writer in your society,your society like dead man.Writers have been a vital part of society for thousands of years. In the most countries government give them financial assistance, because some writers do not gain more money. I think most writers who write significant stories earn enough money. In my opinion,some stories are useful and either,some are not useful.
Preparation school books are important for all societies,writers spend more time for this,but can not gain more money,every time.For this reason, he or she does not want to write another new book. At this situation ,I think government must give them financial assistance for encourage them, because school books are necessary for syllabus . For example,the famous writer of Azerbaijan, Hamdullah Aslanov who is writer of mathematics books for school students, his first and second books failed and he did not earn money from these books but government gave him more money and he wrote necessary book which used all school of Azerbaijan.
On the other hand,may be writers write unnecessary stories,such as about pornography. Naturally,government do not make help them. For instance,another well-known Azerbaijan writer Ali Akhbar, who has wrote many pornography stories and his books do not sale more,he can not make profit and also,government do not give him financial assistance because government said that his stories are not necessary for country or society.
In conclusion,give to writer financial assistance to help them write good literature. But before this,government must think about writers stories if they are useful government must help to them. We,all,must read useful stories for ourselves and for writers.
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your society like dead man.
your society likes a dead man.
Sentence: At this situation ,I think government must give them financial assistance for encourage them, because school books are necessary for syllabus .
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Sentence: For instance,another well-known Azerbaijan writer Ali Akhbar, who has wrote many pornography stories and his books do not sale more,he can not make profit and also,government do not give him financial assistance because government said that his stories are not necessary for country or society.
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give to writer financial assistance to help them write good literature.
giving writers financial assistance helps them write good literature.
Sentence: But before this,government must think about writers stories if they are useful government must help to them.
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