marriage, divorced rates and the marital status of adult American in USA between 1970 and 2000.
The charts give the information about marriage and divorced rates in USA between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult American in two of the years.
It is clear that the number of marriage declined from 1970 to 2000 and the number of divorced was fluctuation. The highest percentage of marital status in two of the years was married status and the lowest was at divorced.
In 1970 and 1980, the figures of marriages was the highest and had the same number around 2,5 million but it fell to the next year untill 2000 at 2 million. The highest of marriages number of divorced was in 1980, about 1,4 millions and it also down untill 2000 only had 1,5 millions.
The highest marital status in 1970 was married at 70% and it still was the highest in 2000 whereas percentag fell became 59%. The Americans adults divorced in the little number in this two years than the other. In 1970, the numbers of adult Americans who divorced was about 0,1% and it increased in 2000 around 9%.
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and the number of divorced was fluctuation
and the number of divorced was in fluctuation
the figures of marriages was the highest
the figure of marriages was the highest
and it also down untill 2000 only had 1,5 millions.
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whereas percentag fell became 59%.
whereas the percentage fell to become 59%.
Sentence: In 1970 and 1980, the figures of marriages was the highest and had the same number around 2,5 million but it fell to the next year untill 2000 at 2 million.
Error: untill Suggestion: until
Sentence: The highest of marriages number of divorced was in 1980, about 1,4 millions and it also down untill 2000 only had 1,5 millions.
Error: untill Suggestion: until
Sentence: The highest marital status in 1970 was married at 70 and it still was the highest in 2000 whereas percentag fell became 59.
Error: percentag Suggestion: percentage
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