the advantages and disadvantages of the shopping in supermarkets

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the advantages and disadvantages of the shopping in supermarkets

Nowadays, shopping in supermarkets is becoming more and more popular. The most of people like shopping in supermarket but the others do not like. This essay discusses the advantages and the drawbacks of the shopping in supermarkets.

First of all, shopping in supermarkets helps consumer feel comfortable. The foods in the supermarket are good quality and safety and hygiene. Moreover, the prices between supermarkets and markets do not always too much different, even sometimes the prices of the supermarkets are cheaper than the market. Secondly, the services in supermarket are good. The ...

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The foods in the supermarket are good quality
The foods in the supermarket are good in quality

the prices between supermarkets and markets do not always too much different,
the prices between supermarkets and markets are not always too different,

it helps them can buy anything they want.
it helps them to buy anything they want.

Supermarkets often have great promotions and costumers will have the opportunity
Supermarkets often have great promotions, and costumers will have the opportunity

because it was frozen too long time.
because it was frozen in a long time.

besides these services bring real benefits to customers,
besides these services which bring real benefits to customers,

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