Some fast food restaurants and supermarkets support the school in order to promote their products. Is it positive or negative development for school and students ??
In today's business world of fierce competition, entrepreneurs use all the possible channels for increasing their profitability. In these terms, restaurants and malls that serve fast food try to target younger generation which at the main, is represented by the most active consumers. While this practice is salutary for the well-being of schools which acquire the additional funding through such sponsorships, the detrimental impacts on the health of students which I am going to discuss in this essay cannot be neglected.
The major argument for keeping one's mind in favour of the support of com...
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Sentence: To sum up, the additional funding for schools may result in higher educational standarts and the creation of conveniences for studying process.
Error: standarts Suggestion: standards
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