This graph below gives information from 2008 report about the consumption of energy in USA since 1980 and the projection in 2030
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant
The line graph depicts the comparison of some sources of energy consumption in USA and its outlook until 2030. It divided into 6 kinds of fuels.
Overall, it can be concluded that each fuel had their own fluctuation within 1980-2010 but for its projection some kind of fuels will uplift whilst other source of energy will increase slightly.
From the graph, petrol and oil was in the first rank as the biggest consumption in USA since 1980 until 2010. It started from 35 quadrillion units which was a huge number of energy's usage. In the second place,natural gas was considered as the source of energy which were utilized by USA's citizen. But,in the following year, the consumption of coal was bigger than natural gas. in the bottom place, there are three kind sources of energy were less consumed by people : Nuclear, Solar wind, and hydropower. Since 1980, these fuels started from a small number. Nuclear had an increase from 1985 to 1990,but the development was not really promising. It remained steady since 2005. The same condition happened to solar/wind and hydropower.
Based on the graph also, each fuel has its projection until 2010. As a result, petrol and oil will reach a peak in 2030 and coal will rise until 30 quadrillion units. However, natural gas will stag after 2015 about over 20 quadrillion. Nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower will have a slight soar but it will not be significant number of consumption.
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- This graph below gives information from 2008 report about the consumption of energy in USA since 1980 and the projection in 2030Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant 70
each fuel had their own fluctuation
each fuel had its own fluctuations
but it will not be significant number of consumption.
but it will not be the significant number of consumption.
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