Neighbor are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
When it’s come to apartment living there are some signs of good neighbour and bad neighbour. I have changed five apartments. On the basis of that experience, I have collected the five basic signs or qualities of good neighbour.
First, Good neighbour are friendly, nice and approachable. I expect from good neighbour that at list I can able to smile and say hello to the person and receive some sort of friendly response as opposite to glare and simply ignorance. For example, where I am living now my entire neighbours in my apartment are friendly, they show respects to each other by greeting. And all this form the friendly atmosphere in my apartment.
Second, Good neighbour are quite. They should be aware that other parson living in the building and keep noise to minimum. They don't scream or play music loud or through parties until late hour.
Third, Good neighbour handle the situation maturely. If good neighbour ever had problem with you or something you were doing says your dog has been barking a lot. He or she kindly approached to you about the matter. Likewise if you ever had a problem with your neighbour he or she would take into account your concerns. Everyone get along better and problems are solved faster when people behave like mature adults. Bad neighbour don't handle the situation maturely. They ignore you respond rudely or turn to passive aggressive relation methods. Good neighbours never behave that way.
Fourth, good neighbour respect the building. Anyone who leaves garbage or junk in hallways, in parking lot or the other common areas is not a good neighbour. A good neighbour allows his or her junk to accumulate in sheared spaces shows disrespect for you and everyone in building. Good neighbour show common courtesy and regularly take out their trash and keep shared and public area clean.
Five, Good neighbour will team up with you to speak with the landlord about a maintenance issue in the common stairway. Ultimately they are looking to reside in a pleasant, friendly and safe environment.
In conclusion, Good neighbour will make a world of difference in how much you enjoy apartment living.
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Sentence: Everyone get along better and problems are solved faster when people behave like mature adults.
Description: The fragment Everyone get along is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace get with verb, past tense
Sentence: Anyone who leaves garbage or junk in hallways, in parking lot or the other common areas is not a good neighbour.
Description: The fragment other common areas is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
Sentence: A good neighbour allows his or her junk to accumulate in sheared spaces shows disrespect for you and everyone in building.
Description: The fragment spaces shows disrespect is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace shows with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
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Avg. Sentence Length: 14.52 21.0
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
better to have 5 paragraphs:
para 1: introduction.
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 23 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 363 350
No. of Characters: 1732 1500
No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.365 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.771 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.46 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 85 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.52 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.795 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.314 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.562 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.144 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5