Writing task 1 (a letter)
Your friend wants to start a new import/export business in the country where you live now. Write to him/her and say
- What product is better to import.
- What part of the country does the product come from?
- Why he/she should import that product.
Dear John,
Hope you are doing well. Convey my regards to your family members. I am glad to hear that you have started import and export business on last month. It is better to import herbal products to my country as you know herbal ingredients widely used in this country for Ayurvedic treatment, especially in snake bite, typhoid, malaria and jaundice.
Most herbal products coming to the market from the southern state of India where there are many mountains enrich with herbs. Though the products are expensive here so if you import these products; you would get more profit.
Moreover, people use some herbs for religious activity which helps them for their custom. In addition, scarcity of herbs takes place during summer; people would buy the herbs at any cost at that time. Let me know if you need any other information. I wish you all success in your endeavours.
Best wishes,
David Wilson
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herbal ingredients widely used in this country
herbal ingredients are widely used in this country
Most herbal products coming to the market from the southern state of India
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where there are many mountains enrich with herbs.
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Attribute Value Ideal
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