The Graph Below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The Graph Below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The line graph compares the daily number of visits to two new web based platforms. It is clearly noticeable that Pop Parade outweigh Music Choice in the first day by having 120.000 versus 40.000 visitors.

Observing Pop Parade, it can be noticed a slight fluctuation between the 1st and 3rd day and within the 5th day it becomes half of the value from the 1st day. Over a period of 4 more days it fluctuates down to the value of 40.000 and after that, interestingly catapults to around 150.000, followed by an erratic fluctuation up to 170.000.

Music choice could be noticed it ranges between 60.000 and 20.000 from day 1 to day 11 then it rockets to 120.000 in just one day. It is followed by a slight fluctuation and in the 15th day could be observed a downward slope evolution.

Over all, it can be noticed throughout the period, people prefer to visit Pop Parade much more than Music Choice.

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Pop Parade outweigh Music Choice
Pop Parade outweighs Music Choice

and in the 15th day could be observed a downward slope evolution.
and in the 15th day a downward slope evolution could be observed .

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