You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter:
• explain your interest in the course
• describe your problems
• find out if a refund is possible
Dear Sir,
I am writing you in the response of an advertisement on your website for a tennis course in London, England.
Since my childhood, I am great fan of tennis, but, unfortunately never get a chance to learn the same. After careful consideration on the advertisement, I thought of joining your training course that is commencing in the month of August. However, there are few problems that are restricting me to join your course. Firstly, I do not have my own racket. Secondly, as I have poor eye sight, I need to wear glasses all the time. Thus, whether, it is possible for a person like me to join your classes.
Moreover, in the month of December,as I need to go back to my home town for some work, is it possible for any refund of the fees during that month. Also, whether, I can keep the same membership even after coming back from India or needs to enroll again.
I am looking forward to hearing soon from you.
Yours faithfully
James
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More sentences varieties wanted. Try to use less pronouns or not to use pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 174 200
No. of Characters: 742 1000
No. of Different Words: 108 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.632 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.264 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.537 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 46 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 32 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.9 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.356 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.69 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4