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The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates how many people visited three London museums (the British Museum, the Science Museum and the Natural History Museum) per month in the summer of 2013. The units are measured in thousands.
Overall, the most of visitors have received by the British museum in 2013 whereas the least visitors have visited in the Science Museum.
Most visitors went to the British museum between June and September. The number fluctuated between 500 and 750. By contrast, the Science Museum and the National History Museum received fewer visitors. The number of people who visited the Science Museum dropped gradually from 400 thousand to 300 from June to August then rose to 450 thousand in September. We can see that the trend for the Natural History Museum was similar. There was a sharp drop in visitors from June to July. The number remained stable in August and then increased steadily in September.
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Overall, the most of visitors have received by the British museum in 2013 whereas the least visitors have visited in the Science Museum.
Description: can you re-write this sentence? you didn't use the tense and voice properly..
flaws:
No. of Words: 151 200 //more details wanted. There is a hidden rule: more content, higher marks.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 151 200
No. of Characters: 739 1000
No. of Different Words: 78 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.505 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.894 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.226 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.556 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.42 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.55 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4