Write a letter to the council to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing dangers.

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Write a letter to the council to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing dangers.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this to complain about an act of gang of five teenagers who left their pet dogs free in the busy Princess Street.

Yesterday afternoon, at 12.30pm, at the Princess Street bus stop, a mixed age group people were waiting for the buses. Unexpectedly, a group of drunken youngsters, in their age of eighteens, released their dogs from their control. This made the dogs to run towards the people at the bus stop and they frightened and attacked the public. Unfortunately, in this incident, a five-year old kid was bitten by one of the wild dogs. Soon after, when people t...

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