Your friend wants to visit your town. Write a letter to him/her giving some information about the town. In your letter include
- What is a good time for a visit?
- Describe some interesting places to visit.
- What accommodation is better for his/her stay?
Dear Amar,
How are you? Hope you are doing well. It has been almost a year since we met, apparently last time we met in a Christmas party organized by our common friend Christy. While reading your letter, I came to know that you are interested to visit my town and you have couple of questions in your mind that you need my help.
Firstly, as currently it is winter here in my town, I will not suggest you to visit in this month. Best time to visit is in the month of February as it would be end of winter and start of summer, so definitely weather is pleasant most of the time in a day. There ...
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Best time to visit is in the month of February as it would be end of winter and start of summer,
The best time to visit is in the month of February as it would be the end of winter and the start of summer,
so definitely weather is pleasant most of the time in a day.
so definitely the weather is pleasant in most of the time of a day.
First and foremost is Disney Land,
First and foremost, it is Disney Land,
service apartment provide you
the service apartment provides you
I am really looking forward to meet you soon.
I am really looking forward to meeting you soon.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
You have issues on article 'the'
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Different Words: 145 100
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.55 0.50
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