The chart below gives information about global sales of games software, CDs and DVD or video.
The bar graph illustrated comparison the amount of three global sales from 2000 to 2003, during a three years period. Overall, the number of buyer game software and DVD/video increased noticeably, while the buyer of CDs decreased steadily a during 3-year period.
2000 to 2003 can be seen how sales have changed global sales. However the number of CD was the most highest dropped gradually from 2000 to 2003. There was a rapid increase in the DVD/video to $30bn during a 3-year period. The game software was the lowest production, but it rose steadily and the game software was remained stable.
While in 2000 and 2001 the game software increased from $12bn to $15bn, DVD/video also rose to $21bn, although the CDs experienced approximately $14bn. The same of condition global sales in 2002 and 2003 in the game software still jumped to $19bn, while the number of DVD/video rose to $30bn. However, the amount of CDs remained constant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'highest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: highest
...sales. However the number of CD was the most highest dropped gradually from 2000 to 2003. Th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'so', 'still', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218390804598 0.268076937826 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.114942528736 0.116061578633 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0689655172414 0.0759168565197 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0574712643678 0.0366838410393 157% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00574712643678 0.0131127313244 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120689655172 0.155750635184 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0229885057471 0.0379272487307 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47558175936 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0459770114943 0.0210936926555 218% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.114942528736 0.0948980150116 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00574712643678 0.00437022459523 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00574712643678 0.00967000014798 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 928.0 1161.00487805 80% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.9 80% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87341772152 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335443037975 0.337110787985 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23417721519 0.247514529752 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183544303797 0.171178102325 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0949367088608 0.112407865282 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47558175936 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493670886076 0.546246751206 90% => OK
Word variations: 38.7850270499 49.3433353143 79% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5555555556 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7331982652 42.9750493124 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.111111111 135.714022679 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 40.9732770745 47.7609492067 86% => OK
Elegance: 2.03225806452 2.94281807926 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334816948608 0.418131533498 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.163612706251 0.181151798455 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0989603071029 0.0850326197045 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.614642342766 0.706616315825 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15983892241 0.157042692854 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177099216254 0.228904883108 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648879382498 0.108899403657 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.490416255006 0.367819155151 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0413668237271 0.0812612215331 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279665375316 0.316326947829 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380643363088 0.0921553760075 41% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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