More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

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...ies in quest of leading a luxurious life , but livelihood in urban places is not s...
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...ake proper measures to address them. Life in urban places has its own drawbac...
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...n problem is getting a renting or buying a home, due to over population it is rea...
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...y and another major problem unemployment ,due to which many individuals try to ear...
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...y individuals try to earn money in wrong ways like robbery, smuggling, gambling ...
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... ways like robbery, smuggling, gambling and spoil their future. For instance my...
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...s like robbery, smuggling, gambling and spoil their future. For instance my cous...
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... in cities tend to go on wrong path. By improving the way of life in rural ar...
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...heir home town and work from there. In conclusion, problems faced by metropo...
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...ch involves huge support of government.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'for instance', 'in conclusion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.286713286713 0.247107548796 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.171328671329 0.15552993741 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115384615385 0.0946569551029 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.027972027972 0.0501201869031 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0314685314685 0.0437536398559 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129370629371 0.122223957237 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0699300699301 0.0403219363162 173% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6816712973 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.041958041958 0.0326786765898 128% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0384615384615 0.0861751148067 45% => More determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0174825174825 0.0214082191602 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00699300699301 0.0119246538136 59% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1628.0 1933.38276553 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 316.052104208 82% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.23754789272 6.10592293882 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20519365927 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373076923077 0.37474360046 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269230769231 0.284197041944 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173076923077 0.203843217982 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115384615385 0.137313986986 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6816712973 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626923076923 0.560935902166 112% => OK
Word variations: 68.9650822569 60.7401812628 114% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0911823647 62% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.7725350517 125% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7623178576 49.5273876611 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.2962962963 93.4120437189 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 9.62962962963 15.2821509519 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.222222222222 0.594174754866 37% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01102204409 200% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.9230769231 49.1922392462 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.10606060606 1.69127372897 125% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.365919872522 0.332604825255 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0650023165665 0.102734651613 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.04106484201 0.0668474354756 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.595586845985 0.534917948617 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175361405852 0.148666948902 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153176315706 0.13441755203 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668306315312 0.0742828286743 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.294300249841 0.324241079732 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0166033571235 0.0640056729886 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231306770259 0.22793763319 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037100808465 0.0582452615562 64% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41883767535 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.88977955912 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.60220440882 154% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.00200400802 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.493987976 95% => OK

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Rates: 83.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.5 Out of 9