The true test of the greatness of a work of art is its ability to be understood by the masses.
Art is one of the medium to express our feelings to people.Art helps us to fetch our talent to the outside world. An art is identified by everyone,only when masses are able to understand it. According to Indian mythology arts are subdivided into 64 categories known as "Lalitha Kalalu" ,which comprises of music, dance , painting etc.
Firstly, everyone has some or the other hidden in them but the actual recognition comes only when we are able to express it and convey easily to our fellow beings .Consider, popular singer Shreya Goshal , she has a huge number of fans because she has succeeded in expresses her talent in a better way. Similarly ravi verma one of the worlds best painter as his work of art is understood by the masses.
Secondly, no art gets its reconition in a single night person has to try harder and harder to become master in a specific art. Now consider a tourist place Hampi in vijayanagaram previously the foreign invaders couldnt understand its greatness and destroyed all the statues . Later the government has recognised its greatness and started protecting it.
To sum it all , our art is given an identity only when it is recognised and understood by the people. So one must try and try till he succeeds to make it famous.Lastly the true test for greatness of work is recognition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Art
...edium to express our feelings to people.Art helps us to fetch our talent to the out...
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...ries known as 'Lalitha Kalalu' ,which comprises of music, dance , painti...
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Suggestion: worlds the best
...er way. Similarly ravi verma one of the worlds best painter as his work of art is understoo...
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... greatness and destroyed all the statues . Later the government has recognised its...
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... started protecting it. To sum it all , our art is given an identity only when ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'lastly', 'second', 'secondly', 'similarly', 'so', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237154150198 0.238963963785 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.193675889328 0.154291517835 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0592885375494 0.0886310499679 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0513833992095 0.0506014161523 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0830039525692 0.0449626384858 185% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0830039525692 0.123526278965 67% => OK
Participles: 0.0474308300395 0.0379742944744 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87031595252 2.82910677849 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0474308300395 0.0316879551592 150% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0014075125626 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0830039525692 0.0950106342287 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00395256916996 0.0245489744465 16% => More modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0158102766798 0.0157978311181 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1329.0 2899.98275862 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 231.0 478.390804598 48% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75324675325 6.0591788892 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.65681771538 84% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350649350649 0.369966551584 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238095238095 0.285172536893 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181818181818 0.207245337619 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142857142857 0.136322040163 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87031595252 2.82910677849 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 234.298850575 61% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614718614719 0.492565540709 125% => OK
Word variations: 63.5547134698 56.8184620615 112% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 21.1264367816 47% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 23.1 23.7468607788 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8279063207 62.0618507366 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.9 143.81877709 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 23.7468607788 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.728815259664 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.87931034483 82% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.71264367816 207% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.9095238095 52.2641144681 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.12048192771 1.64547068916 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484461012952 0.39480681544 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110005489456 0.11556216369 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0586402101517 0.0736162880345 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.616690161059 0.531340600358 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114491073058 0.15197228837 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217409320035 0.158818324754 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127211250511 0.0851127212816 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.26475752847 0.388921930462 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0292418622189 0.0677916285025 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314032816571 0.28015025965 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585246221582 0.0610219844235 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.8591954023 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30459770115 38% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.96264367816 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.10632183908 49% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.93390804598 51% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.04597701149 131% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 15.0862068966 66% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 2.5 Out of 6