Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, there are lot of advertisements on television or on internet. Some People think that advertisements boost the sales of products and encourage people to buy things. I am eighty percent agree with this fact. Now advertisement companies using new technologies and make attractive advertisements.
In every country, advertising companies produces advertisement with famous actors and singers. People especially younger buy products that their actor/singer advertise, although they do not need really need the products. On the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality .Consequently ,people buy the things without enough consideration. For exemplify, one of uncle brought new cell phone without consulting to anyone. It is too expensive, but he is using only for to call someone or receive someone call. He is not using any application of phone. There are lot of mobiles phone publish in market regularly with different functionality .Advertisement companies attract to younger generation because they are easily influence. Consequently, they pressurize their parents to buy expensive things. Furthermore, if someone buy a product due to advertisement, the other people may also affected by the trend, even if the product is not the real need of the society.
On the other hand, Firstly, people get more information from advertisement about new products and they have more options to buy things. Secondly, if person have enough money then he has right buy things even if the product is the real need of the society .For example ,many people have lot of meetings every day .So they meet different people regularly .It will attract show his personality if he is wearing good dress and having good phone. It increase the status in society.
In a nutshell, I concede that people have their own strong opinion, it is better to leave them to make their own decision to buy goods. However, it may necessary to restrict younger people those are easily influence by advisements.
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Sentence: Furthermore, if someone buy a product due to advertisement, the other people may also affected by the trend, even if the product is not the real need of the society.
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