Children over 15 years should be allowed to take their own decision without any interference from Their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Gone are the days when children have no right to live their life independently without their parents decision. In this world of modernization, it is argued that children more than 15 will be allowed to live their life freely with their own decision. Here, i would like to accord with given statement.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, young generation is capable enough to live life in their own ways as it helps them to become goal oriented. To explain, independent decision making at this help a child not only to achieve goals but also boost their self confidence in every aspects of life. Thus, decision make by their own self both increase their confidence and make them responsible. In addition, self decision make children easy to fix in new environment. Therefore, they are able to make friends easily and are co-operative in nature as well and they feel socially stronger.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. Professionally, children above 15 years are who are given an opportunity to make their own decision are more self reliant and self confident. For instance, in this jet age of 21st century they can explore their skills more as well as can enjoy managerial posts. Hence, Independence of making decision lead them challenging and creative youth. On the contrary, others have conflicting views.
Numerous points to explain its thorny side. Initially, children above 15 are not so mature and not so able to take their own decision . However, in this premature age they may distract towards negative sides without their parents guidance. As a result, parents guidance work as a lamp to brighten and secure their future bright.
To recapitulate, allowing children to make their own decision helps them to boost their confidence and will teach them to take responsibilities by themselves but this does not mean they should neglect their parents. In the end, a child is happy if he takes right decision at right time.
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239130434783 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.163043478261 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0842391304348 0.0946595960268 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0679347826087 0.0501214627716 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0923913043478 0.0437548338989 211% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0978260869565 0.122226691241 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0271739130435 0.0403226058552 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71400041095 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0489130434783 0.0326793684256 150% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0434782608696 0.0861772015684 50% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190217391304 0.021408717616 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0054347826087 0.011925033212 46% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2001.0 1933.35771543 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 316.048096192 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.00900900901 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309309309309 0.374742101984 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243243243243 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183183183183 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102102102102 0.137316102897 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71400041095 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 57.6916755596 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.65 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8222780805 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.05 127.492653851 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.65 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.814263465372 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.99599198397 300% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.9743243243 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.12605042017 1.69124875643 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315945090476 0.332605444948 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0672487770264 0.102741220458 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0649950005222 0.0668466124924 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.466786225537 0.534860350844 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148887822711 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107177822594 0.134430193775 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909108258614 0.0742795772207 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311362608125 0.324371583561 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0564667662803 0.0638462369009 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224765252722 0.228012699653 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683546339662 0.058150111329 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9