The fast food industry has negative effects on our health, the environment and family eating habits, Do you agree or disagree?
Well, fast food industry is gaining ground these days as it can change people licker into pink. some people argued that ,heath of people and ways of eating are mostly affected by junk food stuffs that are produced by food industry. Here, i would like to accord with this statement.
There are manifold points to explain my point of view. First and foremost, quality of junk food affect on people health in a wrong way. for instance, fast food is not only unhygienic but also contained lack of nutrients, vitamins and minerals that lead an unhealthy environment. Thus, unhealthy diet can rise to enormous health issue as it has no purity.
further emphasizing my point of view. Fast food services which are always ready to serve reduce our manual work. however, it is vital to remain fit and healthy. As a result, lazy and fatigue become our companion due to curtailing in the amount of manual work. In addition, people get addicted to eat fast food more and more and are avoiding fresh homemade food. Consequently, value of homemade food is decreasing as it has common taste among people. on the contrary, others have conflicting views.
They think that, junk food offers enormous variety in food so that people can change their taste who are fed from daily boring food. Thence, mixture of spices and ingrediants work as a magnet to attract people at fast food point. What is more, junk food are very easy to make as it is time consuming. Finally, In the jet age of 21st century fast food points lucrative to save our precious time.
To recapitulate, it is indeed that fast food points offers different variety according to the tongue of people but i still think that health is our first concern so we need to take junk food in limited amount only for a break sometime.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'on the contrary', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.284482758621 0.247107183377 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.169540229885 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0833333333333 0.0946595960268 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.066091954023 0.0501214627716 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0431034482759 0.0437548338989 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117816091954 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0373563218391 0.0403226058552 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.36831865837 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0373563218391 0.0326793684256 114% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0373563218391 0.0861772015684 43% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0114942528736 0.021408717616 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014367816092 0.011925033212 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2007.0 1933.35771543 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 316.048096192 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.43269230769 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326923076923 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.185897435897 0.28420135186 65% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.134615384615 0.203846283523 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0801282051282 0.137316102897 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36831865837 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573717948718 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 62.1884594078 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4210526316 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9556339682 49.517814964 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.631578947 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.947368421053 0.814263465372 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38877755511 159% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 3.99599198397 551% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 35.0107962213 49.1944974215 71% => OK
Elegance: 1.57731958763 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205389933881 0.332605444948 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0581233976834 0.102741220458 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0523085388528 0.0668466124924 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.521300637172 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.210952316424 0.148594505496 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773868552172 0.134430193775 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461078395663 0.0742795772207 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.191143511379 0.324371583561 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.181691538273 0.0638462369009 285% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106648344443 0.228012699653 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562969671264 0.058150111329 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9