The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement claims that, the most effective way to understand the contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth. Even though it is an effective way to know about contemporary culture but I cannot agree with this statement. At first we have to define what is culture. What is the elements of culture. Then we have to find out the peoples who are using them.
If we study about culture, we will see that, songs, foods, education, politics, language, games all are are the elements of culture. And contemporary culture are those, that are exist in the nation.
Now, if we study about user, we see that youth are not executing all the parts of culture. They are participating in only dramas, songs, and some other entertaining elements. Even they are not covering the half of a nations culture. In politics , the participation of youth is rare. Food culture are dominating by all the people. If we keep aside those parts, we cannot understand the contemporary culture.
If we want to understand the culture of a nation we have to study according to the elements. Step by step we can study to understand the culture. For instance, we can make a map how can we go ahead. We can make chart classifying the all elements like- 1(a) City Culture, 1(b) Rural Culture. 2(a) Food Culture , 2(b) Entertainment 2(c) Political culture etc.
In summary, if we have to understand the contemporary culture of a nation, it will be not enough to analyze only the trends of its youth.
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... analyze only the trends of its youth.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'in summary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203174603175 0.238963963785 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.15873015873 0.154291517835 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0507936507937 0.0886310499679 57% => OK
Adverbs: 0.047619047619 0.0506014161523 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0730158730159 0.0449626384858 162% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0984126984127 0.123526278965 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0253968253968 0.0379742944744 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74585167365 2.82910677849 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0349206349206 0.0316879551592 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0031746031746 0.0014075125626 226% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.101587301587 0.0950106342287 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0253968253968 0.0245489744465 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015873015873 0.0157978311181 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1496.0 2899.98275862 52% => OK
No of words: 261.0 478.390804598 55% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73180076628 6.0591788892 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.65681771538 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298850574713 0.369966551584 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233716475096 0.285172536893 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172413793103 0.207245337619 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111111111111 0.136322040163 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74585167365 2.82910677849 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 234.298850575 52% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471264367816 0.492565540709 96% => OK
Word variations: 43.8804624725 56.8184620615 77% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 21.1264367816 90% => OK
Sentence length: 13.7368421053 23.7468607788 58% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4918096022 62.0618507366 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7368421053 143.81877709 55% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7368421053 23.7468607788 58% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.728815259664 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.87931034483 102% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.71264367816 130% => OK
Readability: 37.1084896148 52.2641144681 71% => OK
Elegance: 1.17045454545 1.64547068916 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419491882507 0.39480681544 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.16330188093 0.11556216369 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.112719284749 0.0736162880345 153% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.568996823231 0.531340600358 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175911708886 0.15197228837 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187381169423 0.158818324754 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134738147176 0.0851127212816 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.416139939741 0.388921930462 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.116672621978 0.0677916285025 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308366193165 0.28015025965 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117226034187 0.0610219844235 192% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.8591954023 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30459770115 38% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.96264367816 242% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.10632183908 49% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.93390804598 51% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 3.04597701149 328% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 15.0862068966 106% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.0 Out of 6