tpo 17 q1
In this set of material, the article states that the human population and the corresponding increase in agriculture and pesticide use have caused much harm to wildlife in the United States-bird in particular and provids three reasons of supports. However, the professor explains that it isn't true that it will be declining in the number of birds and refutes each of author's reasons.
First, the reading states that human populations and settlement continue to expand, bird's natural habitats will continue to disappear. On the contrary, the professor refutes this point by saying that human populations are not effect on the number of bird because there are many birds in city, even Hawkes and falcons, sometimes will effect some species but not all birds.
Second, the article claims that agriculture activities must increase to keep pace with the growing human population. However, the professor contends that human will not cut trees because there are good corps in these trees. People are using these corps.
Third, the reading avers that the pesticides will hurt birds. Conversely, the lecture opposes this point by saying that it is true that some pesticides are hurt bird. Researchers are developing new pesticide that it is low poison, and they also are developing new corps that it will be resisting to pests.
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are not effect on the number of bird
are not affecting on the number of birds
sometimes will effect some species but not all birds.
sometimes will affect some species but not all birds.
it is low poison,
it is low in poison,
are developing new corps that it will be resisting to pests.
are developing new corps that will be resisting to pests.
Sentence: In this set of material, the article states that the human population and the corresponding increase in agriculture and pesticide use have caused much harm to wildlife in the United States-bird in particular and provids three reasons of supports.
Error: provids Suggestion: provide
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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