Some people say taxes should be spent on health care. Other people say that there are more important priorities for taxpayers’ money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have differing views with regard to the question of how state budget should be allocated. While I agree that government should allocate public money for medical care, I would argue that other areas such as education and infrastructure are equally important.
One the one hand, there are several reasons why it could be argued that tax should be spent on healthcare services. The first reason is that the costs of remedies for patients, treatment facilities, and services have increased dramatically, which makes medical treatment not affordable to a large number of people. For instance, mod...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...kes medical treatment not affordable to a large number of people. For instance, modern equipment ...
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Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'disease'?
Suggestion: disease
...more, there have been an increasing new diseases that many people are now suffering, and...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result', 'with regard to', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264462809917 0.247107548796 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.148760330579 0.15552993741 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0936639118457 0.0946569551029 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0523415977961 0.0501201869031 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0192837465565 0.0437536398559 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104683195592 0.122223957237 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0385674931129 0.0403219363162 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98032276523 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0358126721763 0.0326786765898 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0881542699725 0.0861751148067 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0413223140496 0.0214082191602 193% => Try to use less modal verbs (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0110192837466 0.0119246538136 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2104.0 1933.38276553 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 316.052104208 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.43425076453 6.10592293882 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20519365927 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.412844036697 0.37474360046 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.321100917431 0.284197041944 113% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.235474006116 0.203843217982 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.186544342508 0.137313986986 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98032276523 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.560935902166 95% => OK
Word variations: 55.9808914492 60.7401812628 92% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0911823647 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.8 20.7725350517 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8640587231 49.5273876611 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.266666667 93.4120437189 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 15.2821509519 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13333333333 0.594174754866 191% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01102204409 40% => OK
Readability: 53.9100917431 49.1922392462 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.85 1.69127372897 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204765279182 0.332604825255 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.135388839852 0.102734651613 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.081964695707 0.0668474354756 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.560973368547 0.534917948617 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153809175772 0.148666948902 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944258579368 0.13441755203 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584334298201 0.0742828286743 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.385219254859 0.324241079732 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0649013497887 0.0640056729886 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155378248365 0.22793763319 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867640519368 0.0582452615562 149% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41883767535 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.88977955912 153% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.60220440882 115% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.00200400802 100% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.493987976 133% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9