a company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. do you support or oppose the factory?
Establish a large factory has some merits and disadvantages and effect its surround environment. In my point of view its bad points are more superior than it’s benefits. This assay will discuss about its disadvantages such as air pollution effect, transportation problems and financial problem in following paragraphs.
First of all, of the most significant demerit of large factories are their emissions. Massive factories-specially which produce chemical product- have catastrophic effect on their surrounding environment. They release harmful gas in the air and liquid in the water leads to some dangerous disease such as, kidney problem, asthma, heart attack and etc. More ever as I live in village that is surrounding with trees and green mountains, large factory will disturb this harmony and it is not good at all. Because I like my town with it’s beautiful sight seen.
Secondly, factories need transportation systems which has some drawbacks like road traffic, new roads rout, and air pollution. In order to transport final products or raw material factories use trucks which causes heavy traffic. High rate of accident is caused as a result of massive trucks shutter. According to the health transportation agency (HTA) research on 88 small city-population under 20 thousand - rate of car accident death increase 70% after establish big factory in small town.
Finally, this change create some financial problems too. Based on demand-supply rule when the rate demands goes up, the rate of price will goes up. As most of the employee of factory need new home, so the rate of rent will increase sharply. For instance, five years ago state government establish a factory near our town. After two years our town population increased 15 percent, but rate of rent goes up 40%.
Establish a large factory has some merits and disadvantages and effect on it’s surround environment. In my point of view its bad points are more superior than it’s benefits. This assay will discuss about its disadvantages such as air pollution effect, transportation problems and financial problem in following paragraphs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
... In my point of view its bad points are more superior than it’s benefits. This assay will discuss ...
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Line 2, column 343, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...s, kidney problem, asthma, heart attack and etc. More ever as I live in village that is ...
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Line 2, column 502, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...this harmony and it is not good at all. Because I like my town with it’s beautiful sigh...
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Line 2, column 525, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'with its beautiful'?
Suggestion: with its beautiful
...not good at all. Because I like my town with it’s beautiful sight seen. Secondly, factories need t...
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Line 2, column 530, Rule ID: IT_IS[18]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...ood at all. Because I like my town with it’s beautiful sight seen. Secondly, factor...
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Line 2, column 530, Rule ID: ITS_JJ_NNSNN[27]
Message: Did you mean 'its beautiful sight'?
Suggestion: its beautiful sight
...ood at all. Because I like my town with it’s beautiful sight seen. Secondly, factories need transpo...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...demands goes up, the rate of price will goes up. As most of the employee of factory ...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
... In my point of view its bad points are more superior than it’s benefits. This assay will discuss ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.337765957447 0.229887763892 147% => OK
Verbs: 0.106382978723 0.158761421928 67% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103723404255 0.0866891130778 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0292553191489 0.046263068375 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0425531914894 0.0685040099705 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0186170212766 0.0351676179071 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97194600962 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00797872340426 0.0309702414327 26% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00265957446809 0.00188951952338 141% => OK
Determiners: 0.061170212766 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0132978723404 0.0209618222197 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132978723404 0.0139019557991 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2115.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 337.0 408.028673835 83% => OK
Chars per words: 6.27596439169 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364985163205 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296735905045 0.251872472559 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.219584569733 0.174417080927 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145400593472 0.112833075102 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97194600962 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543026706231 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 58.3374961691 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.85 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.560476656 48.84282405 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.85 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 46.5235905045 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.70149253731 1.45489161554 186% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287394156833 0.300154397459 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.07701974908 0.103427244359 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0668676644283 0.0752933317313 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.45817477673 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13356180568 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093691181067 0.114077575197 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641395979742 0.0781384742642 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.200420622411 0.336927656856 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0652935168717 0.067059652881 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177725934414 0.210909579961 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288535204965 0.0618886996521 47% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.6433691756 59% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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