Argument essay
“Since a competing lower-priced newspaper, The Bugle, was started five years ago, The Mercury’s circulation has declined by 10,000 readers. The best way to get more people to read The Mercury is to reduce its price below that of The Bugle, at least until circulation increases to former levels. The increased circulation of The Mercury will attract more businesses to buy advertising space in the paper.”
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Competition has been as issue in every area of marker. When one is rising in straight way then some one will surely come to compete with it and make it’s own space. Here author is saying about the existent competition between two news paper agencies named Bugle and Mercury.
As Mercury is news paper agency was working from older time, Bungle was started 5 years ago. As the Bungle came in the picture it made the great lose in the sells of Mercury news paper and declined 10,000 numbers of readers who selected Bungle as their newspaper.
Author is saying that to come over this problem, and regain the loss of reader due to Bungle, The best way for Mercury is to reduce the prize compare to prize of the Bungle until the circulation increases to the former level of the readers. But only reducing the prize of the news paper will bring back the reader who have been habituated with Bungle?
Quality and the contains of the news paper is very important issue for readers. People reading the news paper to be in touch with what is going in the outer world. Which type of news is being published and what other benefits readers getting on reading the news paper also important for the news paper readers. There are different age group people who are reading the news paper and the there interest is also different. Does news coming in the news papers is of their interest will make them decide to read the news paper or not.
If the contents of the mercury news paper is not so good and if it reduces the prize less then the prize of the Bungle then it’s not going to be beneficial at all. Prize and the type of news coming will decide ultimately the success of the Mercury news paper.
Attraction of the advertisement agency depends on the popularity of the news paper and numbers of the readers of that news paper. If Mercury increases the numbers of the readers by decreasing the prize but not concentrating on the all groups of readers then it may that advertisements companies may not attract too much towards it. Amalgamating all types of news likes education, sports, business, city news and other in proper manners can helps only in attracting the advertisement company.
So it stand that authors points are not compelling. And not able to conclude that decreasing the prize of the news paper will increase the readers and then attract the advertisement company. Additionally Author must provides the evidence about the quality and contains of news paper to increase the numbers of readers.
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Sentence: competition has been as issue in every area of marker.
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Sentence: When one is rising in straight way then some one will surely come to compete with it and make it's own space.
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Sentence: Here author is saying about the existent competition between two news paper agencies named Bugle and Mercury.
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Sentence: As Mercury is news paper agency was working from older time, Bungle was started 5 years ago.
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Sentence: As the Bungle came in the picture it made the great lose in the sells of Mercury news paper and declined 10,000 numbers of readers who selected Bungle as their newspaper.
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Sentence: Author is saying that to come over this problem, and regain the loss of reader due to Bungle, The best way for Mercury is to reduce the prize compare to prize of the Bungle until the circulation increases to the former level of the readers.
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Sentence: But only reducing the prize of the news paper will bring back the reader who have been habituated with Bungle?
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Sentence: Quality and the contains of the news paper is very important issue for readers.
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Sentence: People reading the news paper to be in touch with what is going in the outer world.
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Sentence: Which type of news is being published and what other benefits readers getting on reading the news paper also important for the news paper readers.
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Sentence: There are different age group people who are reading the news paper and the there interest is also different.
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Sentence: Does news coming in the news papers is of their interest will make them decide to read the news paper or not.
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Sentence: If the contents of the mercury news paper is not so good and if it reduces the prize less then the prize of the Bungle then it's not going to be beneficial at all.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Prize and the type of news coming will decide ultimately the success of the Mercury news paper.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Attraction of the advertisement agency depends on the popularity of the news paper and numbers of the readers of that news paper.
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Sentence: If Mercury increases the numbers of the readers by decreasing the prize but not concentrating on the all groups of readers then it may that advertisements companies may not attract too much towards it.
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Sentence: Amalgamating all types of news likes education, sports, business, city news and other in proper manners can helps only in attracting the advertisement company.
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Sentence: So it stand that authors points are not compelling.
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Sentence: And not able to conclude that decreasing the prize of the news paper will increase the readers and then attract the advertisement company.
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Sentence: Additionally Author must provides the evidence about the quality and contains of news paper to increase the numbers of readers.
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vocabulary
No. of Spelling Errors: 3
No. of Words: 442
No. of Different Words: 191
Average Word Length: 4.581
Word Length SD: 2.341
No. of Characters: 2025
Organizations
Average Sentence Length: 22.1
Sentence Length SD: 8.384
Use of Passive Voice: 0
Use of Discourse Markers: 0.4
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.393
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.664
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.165
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Score: 4.5 in 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 13 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 442 350
No. of Characters: 2025 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.585 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.581 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.341 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.384 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.393 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.664 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.165 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Sentence: competition has been as issue in every area of marker.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: When one is rising in straight way then some one will surely come to compete with it and make it's own space.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to it's and own
Sentence: Here author is saying about the existent competition between two news paper agencies named Bugle and Mercury.
Description: The fragment Here author is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Here with adjective
Description: The fragment agencies named Bugle is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace named with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: As Mercury is news paper agency was working from older time, Bungle was started 5 years ago.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: As the Bungle came in the picture it made the great lose in the sells of Mercury news paper and declined 10,000 numbers of readers who selected Bungle as their newspaper.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: Author is saying that to come over this problem, and regain the loss of reader due to Bungle, The best way for Mercury is to reduce the prize compare to prize of the Bungle until the circulation increases to the former level of the readers.
Description: The word due is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to due
Description: The fragment prize compare to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace compare with verb, past participle
Sentence: But only reducing the prize of the news paper will bring back the reader who have been habituated with Bungle?
No grammatical errors
Sentence: Quality and the contains of the news paper is very important issue for readers.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: People reading the news paper to be in touch with what is going in the outer world.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: Which type of news is being published and what other benefits readers getting on reading the news paper also important for the news paper readers.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to benefits and readers
Sentence: There are different age group people who are reading the news paper and the there interest is also different.
Description: The fragment the there interest is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace there with adjective
Sentence: Does news coming in the news papers is of their interest will make them decide to read the news paper or not.
Description: The fragment the news papers is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
Sentence: If the contents of the mercury news paper is not so good and if it reduces the prize less then the prize of the Bungle then it's not going to be beneficial at all.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: Prize and the type of news coming will decide ultimately the success of the Mercury news paper.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: Attraction of the advertisement agency depends on the popularity of the news paper and numbers of the readers of that news paper.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: If Mercury increases the numbers of the readers by decreasing the prize but not concentrating on the all groups of readers then it may that advertisements companies may not attract too much towards it.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, pre-quantifier
Suggestion: Refer to the and all
Description: The tag a modal auxillary is not usually followed by that
Suggestion: Refer to may and that
Sentence: Amalgamating all types of news likes education, sports, business, city news and other in proper manners can helps only in attracting the advertisement company.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to can and helps
Sentence: So it stand that authors points are not compelling.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to authors and points
Sentence: And not able to conclude that decreasing the prize of the news paper will increase the readers and then attract the advertisement company.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: Additionally Author must provides the evidence about the quality and contains of news paper to increase the numbers of readers.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to must and provides