More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation.
Describe some of the problems, over reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at
least one possible solution.
Now a days, the primary choice of transportation for many people are their cars, more and more private cars are being added to the roads everyday. Cars can create problems for both humans and environment. It is only when we replace this choice with optimal ways of transportation, we can overcome some of these problems.
There are multiple problems that cars can create. Firstly, the pollution , cars which runs on petrol or diesel will release harmful chemicals and gases into the environment. Many researches shown that these gases can cause respiratory problems in both children and adults. Secondly, cars contribute majorly to the city roads congestion. It is a struggle to drive private car during peak timings. Thirdly, cars may breakdown when we need them the most. Situations like these can add up and cause personal stress.
In order to avoid problems caused by private cars, one should make a transition to public transport. Public transport is always reliable, have relatively less carbon foot print on environment. People who are using public transport can spend their commute time in productive manner either by reading a book or answering e-mails. Governments also should encourage public transport in efficient manner. Second optimal way of commuting is car pooling, now a days there are many apps for carpooling network, one can easily register in one of them and share a car. Thirdly, if the distance that needs to travel is not very far, bicycle is ideal choice . The extra benefit from this mode of transportation is physical exercise.
There are multiple ways one can overcome the problems that arose by using private cars. Its individual responsibility to aware of these problems and look for the alternative which suits them best.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25078369906 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.150470219436 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100313479624 0.0946595960268 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0564263322884 0.0501214627716 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0344827586207 0.0437548338989 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0909090909091 0.122226691241 74% => OK
Participles: 0.0282131661442 0.0403226058552 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7211843544 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0219435736677 0.0326793684256 67% => OK
Particles: 0.00313479623824 0.00163938923432 191% => OK
Determiners: 0.0783699059561 0.0861772015684 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0376175548589 0.021408717616 176% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0219435736677 0.011925033212 184% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1761.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09342560554 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349480968858 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266435986159 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200692041522 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121107266436 0.137316102897 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7211843544 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57785467128 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 61.3353041725 60.7387585426 101% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.2105263158 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9268554625 49.517814964 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6842105263 127.492653851 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2105263158 20.7743622355 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.814263465372 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.99599198397 225% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.8541249317 49.1944974215 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.53246753247 1.69124875643 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392953848058 0.332605444948 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0626134447374 0.102741220458 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0527884811326 0.0668466124924 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.425669213215 0.534860350844 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118747392249 0.148594505496 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122405628366 0.134430193775 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804367590398 0.0742795772207 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.260582067857 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.061246096109 0.0638462369009 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272775678949 0.228012699653 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691620027388 0.058150111329 119% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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