To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
The author is claiming that the major cities are the decider of the most important charactreristics of a society. I am not completely agree with the author's claim because the society is influenced by their elders and in a country like India there were no major or minor cities before some decades but it was famous for the vilages and countyside and, these regoins are the mothers of the culture.
First point is that how many major cities are there or how much portion of the whole area it covers, for example there are less than 20 mega cities in India, while myriad number of villages are there and we can't accurately predict the important characteristics of a society just by judging the these limited major cities. It is certainly true that the major cities are the one who are having better lifestyle and they are also well educated compare to other side of a society but villages and small cities are suffering from enumorous problem that the major cities are not. By proper studies of awe can see that small cities and villages are the one by which the country is growing for example, farmers are the major suppliers of the the country's wealth.
Secondly villages and small cities are one which are having the beauty of nature and and peace while in a hectic life of major cities one is not able to enjoy the beauty of nature and now a days visitors are prefering to go to see the old momuments and villages and our culture is also influenced by them so the real gist of a culture at the time of festivals is enjoyed in these vilages. For example in India there are many festivals like "Uttarayan" and "Ganesh chaturthi" they are famous in Gujarat and Mumabai respectively so they are influenced by the paricular region and characteristics of both the states are so different.
Thirdly in villages there are lack of resourses and facilities, while judging the major cities we can see that they are very well developed but we cant predict anything about the whole society because the major portion is coverd by these small cities and villages who are suffering from so many problems and living a very simple life. As the sari was the singular cloth wore by ladies before some decades in India and now a days in all major cities many of the morden clothes like jeans, shirt, kurties are being wore by ladies but in many villages and small cities still due to parochial approach some families dont allow them to wore anything except a sari. It's like the major cities are cover of the society and we cant judge a book by it's cover.
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... cities are cover of the society and we cant judge a book by its cover.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'while', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243298969072 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.146391752577 0.157235817809 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111340206186 0.0880659088768 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0515463917526 0.0497285424764 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0371134020619 0.0444667217837 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140206185567 0.12292977631 114% => OK
Participles: 0.039175257732 0.0406280797675 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5407033883 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0123711340206 0.030933414821 40% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.115463917526 0.0997080785238 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00412371134021 0.0249443105267 17% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0123711340206 0.0148568991511 83% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2568.0 2732.02544248 94% => OK
No of words: 456.0 452.878318584 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63157894737 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30701754386 0.366273622748 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.208333333333 0.280924506359 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.118421052632 0.200843997647 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0679824561404 0.132149295362 51% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5407033883 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421052631579 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.3291349252 55.4138127331 84% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 45.6 23.380412469 195% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 92.8592483278 59.4972553346 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 256.8 141.124799967 182% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.6 23.380412469 195% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.3 0.674092028746 193% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 66.4333333333 51.4728631049 129% => OK
Elegance: 1.79824561404 1.64882698954 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326329660145 0.391690518653 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.226212632287 0.123202303941 184% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0645153905103 0.077325440228 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.770192487763 0.547984918172 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0849638893985 0.149214159877 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21504225383 0.161403998019 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832170451184 0.0892212321368 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.582893212926 0.385218514788 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0386051926667 0.0692045440612 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259531996306 0.275328986314 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459989029027 0.0653680567796 70% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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