You are a secretary, planning a corporate event. Write a letter to entertainment company explaining what kind of party you would like it to be, indicate date and time of the event and your special requests.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that we have considered you as an event planner for our corporate party on the occasion of the thirtieth anniversary of our company.
My name is Sara Khan and working as a secretary of IBM Corporation. We are going to complete thirty years on this September. On this auspicious occasion, we are planning to have a big corporate party following with huge press conference.
First of September is the tentative date for this event. We would like to this party to be the grand. We are going to invite all the business tycoons, so it should be meet the business standards.
We want a large LCD as the venue need to be large enough to accommodate around three thousand people. Also, we expect good quality of electronic devices to be used.
I would like to have detail plan including venue and food arrangements before 25th of August on my mail. You can mail me on asdasf@qwert.com
Yours Faithfully,
Sara Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t. We would like to this party to be the grand. We are going to invite all the bu...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uld be meet the business standards. We want a large LCD as the venue need to b...
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Line 14, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wert.com Yours Faithfully, Sara Khan
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267379679144 0.220444632235 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.171122994652 0.167888034529 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0641711229947 0.0606518309736 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0106951871658 0.0506257000042 21% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.096256684492 0.118615021944 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106951871658 0.107062808482 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0534759358289 0.041066498444 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80954872067 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0534759358289 0.0385302599488 139% => OK
Particles: 0.00534759358289 0.00132118243153 405% => OK
Determiners: 0.0855614973262 0.0714148451538 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0213903743316 0.0191574576366 112% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 981.0 1141.60824742 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.134020619 82% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77058823529 5.53046319177 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78085437643 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.288235294118 0.284621296913 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.211764705882 0.211203875043 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176470588235 0.133321485273 132% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129411764706 0.0843313296314 153% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80954872067 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.622163163488 100% => OK
Word variations: 58.3699928282 62.8969750728 93% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 15.4545454545 16.4300151701 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0278561251 44.7399317507 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1818181818 90.9928171075 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.4300151701 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.272727272727 0.613754768223 44% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.09278350515 143% => OK
Readability: 36.6310160428 37.5504026743 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.53846153846 1.13073093955 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384783388206 0.331212695627 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100308063717 0.0927372745006 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.061830410881 0.0736520305886 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.644410943141 0.579516596996 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167552769022 0.180689518051 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150186359214 0.122183219658 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679688672041 0.0765303033291 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.206914410214 0.211926503985 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0782315748219 0.0737400523855 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218624022107 0.203819188451 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611040642132 0.067151250289 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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