do you agree or disagree with this statement
the bast way to travel is in a group led by a tour gide
When it comes to travel, a vast range of variety comes to mind. There are so many kinds of way to go on a travel from different kinds of vehicle which could be used to different ways of going. In spite of the fact that traveling in a group has lots of merits, I personally prefer to go on a travel without a group. There are three prominent reason to show why I have this preference.
First and foremost, travelling in a group needs to follow the tour leader without any interfering in planning your trip. In group travelling all parts of scheduling is done by tour leader that it means your time is not for yourself and this is not enjoyable to not to have allowance to planning your own time. For example, one year ago I went on a two-day travel in a group. In the first day, although there were not no especial plan to see the sightseeing, we were not allowed to go out of the rural house, our accommodation, that it made us so exhausted.
Another prominent reason is that the price of this kind of tours is so high in a way that in comparison by a trip which you go without tour, it would be about twice or triple. Considering the fact that in these trips all meals are prepared or are served in restaurants, are more expensive than foods which is prepared by yourself. As an instance, in a mentioned trip, even though we were overcharged for paying the cost of the tour, were served such a low quality and quantity food that were hungry even after eating it.
Last but not least, in group travels the less sightseeing will be possible to visit than the one you go without tour, because, in these travels always there are lots of people who are not punctuate and arrive later than others before going out or for coming back. For example, Russia was my last trip abroad in the last summer. My husband and I went to that journey by ourselves and we could visit most beautiful places than people who had come by tour.
To sum up, for all mentioned reasons above, I strongly disagree to go on travel in a group led by a tour guide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
...of merits, I personally prefer to go on a travel without a group. There are three promin...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'two-day travel'.
Suggestion: two-day travel
...me. For example, one year ago I went on a two-day travel in a group. In the first day, although ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'punctuated'.
Suggestion: punctuated
...ys there are lots of people who are not punctuate and arrive later than others before goi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'kind of', 'in spite of', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196172248804 0.229887763892 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.172248803828 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0717703349282 0.0866891130778 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0502392344498 0.046263068375 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0574162679426 0.0685040099705 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.165071770335 0.118717715034 139% => OK
Participles: 0.0478468899522 0.0351676179071 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4074672246 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0382775119617 0.0309702414327 124% => OK
Particles: 0.00478468899522 0.00188951952338 253% => OK
Determiners: 0.0933014354067 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00956937799043 0.0209618222197 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0191387559809 0.0139019557991 138% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2036.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 384.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30208333333 5.86048508987 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.25 0.338922669872 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.1640625 0.251872472559 65% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.114583333333 0.174417080927 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.078125 0.112833075102 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4074672246 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 54.0067370262 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 25.6 20.5533526081 125% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.054338716 48.84282405 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.733333333 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.5533526081 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.644075263715 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 42.00625 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.46153846154 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289933518757 0.300154397459 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109054669704 0.103427244359 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0713507387553 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.586218195999 0.497263757937 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171534846367 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122287283461 0.114077575197 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690479190478 0.0781384742642 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.272551736635 0.336927656856 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0626780919273 0.067059652881 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197209226471 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511788759781 0.0618886996521 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8870967742 34% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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