What are important quality of roommate?
The 20th and 21th centuries are characterized by all the momentous changes which have been made in humans' life. Perhaps the most important milestone of these two centuries is the characteristics which people in all around the globe possess. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether what traits our roommates should have. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent my personal perspective is concerned, roommates can play a key role not only in our daily life but also in our education. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that a good roommate is always quiet and respectful. Scientifically speaking, we all know that a place that students need to study should be nice quiet spot. In fact, a plethora of students like to do their works without being distraction by presence of others when they are meditating. For example, my roommate and I are living now in dormitory together. When I am studying or concentrate on the topic, they make an effort to create calm environment and try to be quiet. Actually, hardly ever we made a noise when others are meditating. Delving further into the issue reveal that good roommates not only do respect to the rules but also patronize others in their education. Indeed, not only do nice roommates try to appreciate the situations but also bend over backwards to be the best roommate. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country; show that students who provided with a quiet and respectful roommate have been more successful not only in their education also in their social life.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that good roommates always are responsible for their activities. Broadly speaking, students always should take the responsibility of what they do especially when they do something wrong. To put it in other word, roommates never pass the buck of their works. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, maybe honesty or even trustworthy be the most important characters rather than being responsible or respectful. In fact, roommates need to be trustful and honest due to the fact not only do they spend their precious time together but also share their properties. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, roommates have different qualities that two of the most important of these quality can be respectful and responsible. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that a good roommate always is quiet and respect to the rules in dormitory. Additionally, they take the responsibility of their faults and make an effort to make it up.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aults and make an effort to make it up.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.184410646388 0.229887763892 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.173003802281 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0893536121673 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.104562737643 0.046263068375 226% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0608365019011 0.0685040099705 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0912547528517 0.118717715034 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0456273764259 0.0351676179071 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99425882941 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0342205323194 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.00380228136882 0.00188951952338 201% => OK
Determiners: 0.0855513307985 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0133079847909 0.0209618222197 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0247148288973 0.0139019557991 178% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2920.0 2387.08602151 122% => OK
No of words: 480.0 408.028673835 118% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08333333333 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345833333333 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26875 0.251872472559 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.225 0.174417080927 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.164583333333 0.112833075102 146% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99425882941 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495833333333 0.524397521467 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 57.3648143097 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6839779617 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.458333333333 0.644075263715 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 46.875 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 0.949438202247 1.45489161554 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159049640831 0.300154397459 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0851717653677 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0682367735413 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.437908676946 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12307358991 0.151897553556 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575221977264 0.114077575197 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536097954872 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.428299252705 0.336927656856 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0380164728675 0.067059652881 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115536911789 0.210909579961 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278018051268 0.0618886996521 45% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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