Essay topics: Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying.
All of us know that there are a lot of departments and faculties in the university and each one of them is responsible to teach students in specific field of science. Although every faculty should concentrate in main field of study, there are many courses that are not directly related to that field and students should study that courses. The question that poses itself: Do student have to study only courses in field they are interested. In my point of view, students should study courses that they are interested in and some courses they are not interested in because many field in science are related either directly or indirectly and maybe some students feel lost and can not determine which courses they interested in.
First of all, many field of science are related to each other. Some of them have a direct strong connection and other have hidden or indirect connection. I mean by that, students can learn many courses in field they interested in but that does not mean that they cannot apply what they have learned in another field. For example, recently, all of us have noticed the role that technology does in our life but did anyone imagine that we can design and create machines that can detect tumor in some parts of human bodies?. Today we can use image processing and Artificial Intelligence techniques in field of medecin.So many field of science are integrated and students have to have some basic knowledge in some fields to be able to apply what they have learned perfectly.
Furthermore, some students may not be able to determine and choose what they want to be in the future or what the field they are interested in. so in this situation they cannot choose the courses and schools and universities have to help them to find themselves. For instance, every years,many students enters the faculty of electricity and as we know that this field is huge and have a lot of sub-fields.A new study shows that more than ten percent of them cannot choose directly what field they want to study so university have to introduce in the first two years some courses that can help them to have a knowledge about every section and that will help them to choose the field to continue their studies.
Finally, somebody may refute what I have said and claim that students loses their time when they study courses out of their studies.In my opinion; it is better to lose some time when they are young and in the first year of their study than feel lost after years of study at university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 572, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
...rses they are not interested in because many field in science are related either directly ...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
...es they interested in. First of all, many field of science are related to each other. S...
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Line 3, column 615, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...lligence techniques in field of medecin.So many field of science are integrated an...
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Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
...gence techniques in field of medecin.So many field of science are integrated and students ...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...es and schools and universities have to help them to find themselves. For instance, every years,m...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , many
...nd themselves. For instance, every years,many students enters the faculty of electric...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...ld is huge and have a lot of sub-fields.A new study shows that more than ten perc...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...they study courses out of their studies.In my opinion; it is better to lose some t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i mean', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.19829424307 0.25644967241 77% => OK
Verbs: 0.183368869936 0.15541462614 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0703624733475 0.0836205057962 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046908315565 0.0520304965353 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0788912579957 0.0272364105082 290% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.132196162047 0.125424944231 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0213219616205 0.0416121511921 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42836567549 2.79052419416 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0362473347548 0.026700313972 136% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0788912579957 0.113004496875 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0319829424307 0.0255425247493 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0277185501066 0.0127820249294 217% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2498.0 2731.13054187 91% => OK
No of words: 439.0 446.07635468 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69020501139 6.12365571057 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.57801047555 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.271070615034 0.378187486979 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.211845102506 0.287650121315 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148063781321 0.208842608468 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0888382687927 0.135150697306 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42836567549 2.79052419416 87% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 207.018472906 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405466970387 0.469332199767 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.9829661337 52.1807786196 84% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.039408867 65% => OK
Sentence length: 33.7692307692 23.2022227129 146% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.060455099 57.7814097925 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 192.153846154 141.986410481 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7692307692 23.2022227129 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 0.724660767414 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.58251231527 223% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 54.9537410198 51.9672348444 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.13793103448 1.8405768891 62% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258315369379 0.441005458295 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.238262560931 0.135418324435 176% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0952243793316 0.0829849096947 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.656371261006 0.58762219726 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174353602845 0.147661913831 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146992624749 0.193483328276 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841439297233 0.0970749176394 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.49996709304 0.42659136922 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0887655586762 0.0774707102158 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193628315957 0.312017818177 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689799750649 0.0698173142475 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.33743842365 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.87684729064 29% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 6.46551724138 108% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 14.657635468 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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