Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
When it comes to the issue effects of television on people, pessimists believe that it plays a destructive role in peoples’ life. However, optimists have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account the following reason.
First and the most important reason is that many movies and programs of television are violence. As we all know, people, especially like to act and perform like what they have seen in television. Hence, violence movies affect juveniles’ behavior and increase their delinquency in the society. As a result, the television makes a violence-rich environment, so that people think they can solve any predicaments by the conflicts. They do not tolerate differences, which have always existed between various religious or cultures. Overall, the biggest disadvantage of watching television lies in the fact that expanding conflicts.
A further point we must consider is that watching television makes us less active. We do not need to do anything for watching television, unless siting on the sofa and push the buttons of remote control for changing channels. In this way, most people, who spend a lot of time front of television in a day, suffer of obesity and its negative consequences. Fat people are at the risk of heart attack, diabetes, high blood pressure, and so on. This condition is very awful. I think that a small example can give some light to this topic. In my university, several middle-age teachers died because of the heart attack, while they were at the acme of academic achievements. It is a great unfortunate for university and their families.
Apart from all points I made above, watching television does not allow us to exercise our imagination ability. Through movies, all happening and science are shown to audiences, and they do not need to imagine them. In a long-time people accustom to do not use of their brain, and it decreases their creativity. In modern Western country, psychologists warn that school students should not watch television more than two hours per day.
All above evidence supports the undeniable fact that television has numerous negative effects such as promoting violence and inactivity, and decrease people’s imagination ability. Of course, as an English proverb goes “coin has two sides,” those who take the opposite view are partly reasonable that the television allow us to be aware of news from around the world. Nonetheless, I think that its dangers outweigh profits. Last but not least, let us hope people gain deeper insight that aim of living.
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not related to the topic. You need to discuss about communication with friends and family. Not how TV is bad; but how is it influencing you family time.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'while', 'apart from', 'i think', 'of course', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256048387097 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.157258064516 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0786290322581 0.0866891130778 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0362903225806 0.046263068375 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0604838709677 0.0685040099705 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129032258065 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0241935483871 0.0351676179071 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91332239479 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0181451612903 0.0309702414327 59% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0806451612903 0.0887237588012 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00806451612903 0.0209618222197 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0100806451613 0.0139019557991 73% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2634.0 2387.08602151 110% => OK
No of words: 426.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.18309859155 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37558685446 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.30985915493 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.223004694836 0.174417080927 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140845070423 0.112833075102 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91332239479 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589201877934 0.524397521467 112% => OK
Word variations: 72.2801948626 59.2087087015 122% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.3846153846 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5092678814 48.84282405 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.307692308 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 20.5533526081 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 47.3705308776 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.61111111111 1.45489161554 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211618126907 0.300154397459 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0634263067412 0.103427244359 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0486806871777 0.0752933317313 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.427951311586 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125992591032 0.151897553556 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693947708597 0.114077575197 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485831153514 0.0781384742642 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.280089658615 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.062265693617 0.067059652881 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13862111448 0.210909579961 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289637133201 0.0618886996521 47% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.86379928315 311% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 2.4623655914 406% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.