Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It may indeed be true to say that celebrations, wedding functions and birthday parties are just the wastage of money; this subject, however, requires further analysis. A large number of people are in favor to celebrations and parties are necessary for being a good society while others disagree. In this essay, I will analyze some arguments for and against regarding this statement.
I strongly believe that such type of functions are really cause of huge expenses. These expenses create a bad influence on the income of salaried person. For instance, the cost of a party is normally greater than the monthly salary. It’s so hard to save money for future events but these events leftover all money in a simple event. Mostly extra things are buy just for showing better to another. Therefore, everyone happily participate in this competition. Moreover it is also cause of borrow disease in our society. For example, everyone wants to enjoy with their friends and family in luxury party and forgot to balance the expenditures.
A contrary school of thought believes people should celebrates all events of our life whatever wedding, birthday or other celebrations. They concentrate on relations and behave socially in surroundings. For example, except such events, our life is just bore and work like a cow. We are working for money and make savings to facilitate our life that’s why money has less worth than our celebrations.
From what has been discussed in this essay, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion to recapitulate it is my own personal view that the balance is necessary in our life to avoid extra expenses in parties and celebrate all events of beautiful life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...ct, however, requires further analysis. A large number of people are in favor to celebrations and...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'caused'.
Suggestion: caused
... that such type of functions are really cause of huge expenses. These expenses create...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...appily participate in this competition. Moreover it is also cause of borrow disease in o...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'caused'.
Suggestion: caused
...n this competition. Moreover it is also cause of borrow disease in our society. For e...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'celebrate'
Suggestion: celebrate
...chool of thought believes people should celebrates all events of our life whatever wedding...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'really', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244444444444 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.146031746032 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0888888888889 0.0946595960268 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0571428571429 0.0501214627716 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0539682539683 0.0437548338989 123% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136507936508 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0222222222222 0.0403226058552 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75501600348 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285714285714 0.0326793684256 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0825396825397 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0126984126984 0.021408717616 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00952380952381 0.011925033212 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1693.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06810035842 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397849462366 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.290322580645 0.28420135186 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204301075269 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118279569892 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75501600348 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 65.2900379241 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4375 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7615370964 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8125 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.814263465372 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 46.4697580645 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.56790123457 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348322288762 0.332605444948 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0661346025853 0.102741220458 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0649301643712 0.0668466124924 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.463983648739 0.534860350844 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185523721653 0.148594505496 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124472983946 0.134430193775 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718845280727 0.0742795772207 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.284143416335 0.324371583561 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.030913838214 0.0638462369009 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240294101578 0.228012699653 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813494842595 0.058150111329 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.