Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that is always better to have a teacher? Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.”
Learning is a continuous and never ending process. People have different opinions about learning from experts or doing a self study. I believe, one can learn better by themselves instead of relying on others for their level of knowledge expertise and dependency . I will like to explore why I feel this way in the following essay.
To begin with, life is full of experiences and new learnings on a daily basis. When we are trying to learn from a teacher or a person who claims of having knowledge about the subject, we just rely on his or her knowledge base. We don’t go out of the box to validate if the knowledge that is shared is correct and complete. While learning on our own we get a broader perspective of the topic. With the available technology there are multiple sites available on Internet which provides immense knowledge. For eg, when I was learning a new computer language, the teacher could only explain what was present in the text books. We as students were required to do more apart from what is present in the books while doing our final exam projects. Hence, we relied more on internet rather than a teacher to complete our assignments successfully. Moreover, a teacher has limited time available to teach us and so its highly not possible to cover vast topics. So for gaining wide spread knowledge, one has to explore more options instead of being dependent on the teacher.
Secondly, in order to eliminate the problem of dependency on teachers, one must follow the approach of self learning. When we are learning with the help of teachers, we have to follow their time zone, depend on their availability, sometimes a teacher may not be able to share or give apt examples. These all factors play a vital role when we learn from others. Whereas, with the option of self study one can learn at any flexible time and place. We ourselves can decide the length of our daily study pattern, techniques and strategies required to study. I do agree with the fact, that teachers are required at an very early stages of life, when we are just neophytes in learning. But, we cannot negate the fact that teachers will not be present to help us every time. For eg, while working in an organization, I realized multiple times that I got stuck in my work. I couldn’t take help from any of my teacher as I had left my college since 3 years, so I had to rely on self study, refer some books are google it to solve the problem. On successfully solving the issue, I gained lot of confidence and assured myself that I can deliver successful projects . Basically teachers are just to lay the foundation for every student. So I think to have an all round growth one must avoid dependency to a possible extent.
To sum it up, I strongly believe self study is the better option. This is will boost our confidence, will help us achieve massive knowledge and reduce dependency on others to complete our task.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... a self study. I believe, one can learn better by themselves instead of relying on oth...
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Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...el of knowledge expertise and dependency . I will like to explore why I feel this ...
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Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
... knowledge expertise and dependency . I will like to explore why I feel this way in ...
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Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...that is shared is correct and complete. While learning on our own we get a broader pe...
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Line 2, column 385, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... our own we get a broader perspective of the topic. With the available technology...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...les. These all factors play a vital role when we learn from others. Whereas, wit...
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Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...the fact, that teachers are required at an very early stages of life, when we are ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e working in an organization, I realized multiple times that I got stuck in my w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ization, I realized multiple times that I got stuck in my work. I couldn't ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...f that I can deliver successful projects . Basically teachers are just to lay the ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'apart from', 'as to', 'i feel', 'i think', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212068965517 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.179310344828 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0655172413793 0.0866891130778 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0448275862069 0.046263068375 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0844827586207 0.0685040099705 123% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118965517241 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0379310344828 0.0351676179071 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60959483581 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0362068965517 0.0309702414327 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00172413793103 0.00188951952338 91% => OK
Determiners: 0.0793103448276 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0224137931034 0.0209618222197 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0189655172414 0.0139019557991 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2923.0 2387.08602151 122% => OK
No of words: 520.0 408.028673835 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62115384615 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317307692308 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240384615385 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171153846154 0.174417080927 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1 0.112833075102 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60959483581 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 60.7684457412 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5714285714 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3110627903 48.84282405 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.392857143 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.535714285714 0.644075263715 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.6098901099 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.19553072626 1.45489161554 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223392498802 0.300154397459 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0805463528261 0.103427244359 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0606566178217 0.0752933317313 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.408598585672 0.497263757937 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115058097351 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732361729694 0.114077575197 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359420220159 0.0781384742642 46% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330642462225 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.117613215919 0.067059652881 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151724974741 0.210909579961 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188734029141 0.0618886996521 30% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.75985663082 326% => OK
Total topic words: 26.0 13.6433691756 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.