Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
In past years, people used to purchase goods wisely. Most of families made a list of necessary items they needed, discussed how to spare a money and don't buy something redundant. Today everything has changed. Folks tend to buy expansive clothes, gadgets, even cars when they actually don't need them. Therefore, a lot of families borrowing money from their friends or taking credits, which they can't refund. In my opinion, there are two reasons that course such tendency.
First of all, contemporary people forget the main value of our life. It is family. Today youth tend to compete each other with costly accessories and show someone its own bunch of costly mobile phones, while their children compeled to eat cheap fastfood and wear shabby clothes.
There is also other course induses people to buy useless things they can't afford. I think, modern advertisements that we watch on TV, see in internet sites, magasines and other wide spread media sourses. Some people could be influensed by eye-catching advertisement that almost coersing us to purchase something. As a result, they spend their last money and dont think what they gonna eat tomorrow.
I think that government should pay a bit of attention to this problem and appeal common people do not be apathetic. Periodicaly, remind us that we thirstly ought to think about our health, nutrition, education. These things are more important than empty boast. Don't waste your money for nothing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the families') or simply say ''Most families''.
Suggestion: Most of the families; Most families
..., people used to purchase goods wisely. Most of families made a list of necessary items they nee...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ded, discussed how to spare a money and dont buy something redundant. Today everythi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
..., gadgets, even cars when they actually dont need them. Therefore, a lot of families...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r friends or taking credits, which they cant refund. In my opinion, there are two re...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...duses people to buy useless things they cant afford. I think, modern advertisements ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...result, they spend their last money and dont think what they gonna eat tomorrow. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...gs are more important than empty boast. Dont waste your money for nothing.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'i think', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271062271062 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.164835164835 0.155533422707 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0989010989011 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.03663003663 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0805860805861 0.0437548338989 184% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0879120879121 0.122226691241 72% => OK
Participles: 0.025641025641 0.0403226058552 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54210873807 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03663003663 0.0326793684256 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.040293040293 0.0861772015684 47% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00732600732601 0.021408717616 34% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018315018315 0.011925033212 154% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1458.0 1933.35771543 75% => OK
No of words: 239.0 316.048096192 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10041841004 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355648535565 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246861924686 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18410041841 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10460251046 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54210873807 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.71129707113 0.56093040696 127% => OK
Word variations: 90.7492141493 60.7387585426 149% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0588235294 20.7743622355 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6019639881 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7647058824 127.492653851 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0588235294 20.7743622355 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 38.745015998 49.1944974215 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.36363636364 1.69124875643 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213522612671 0.332605444948 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0227741959366 0.102741220458 22% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0299211083448 0.0668466124924 45% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.401014298898 0.534860350844 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152966751531 0.148594505496 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625251571121 0.134430193775 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459099164904 0.0742795772207 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.164985656607 0.324371583561 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0331604329718 0.0638462369009 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127326071519 0.228012699653 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393686343538 0.058150111329 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.41683366733 263% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.